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Reviews for Mind Trap

By : serpentlady
  • From lizkrohn on March 16, 2019

    A synopsis/flashback of the things they learnt, and the places they saw, would be appropriate here. also what happens when the Weasleys fetch Harry for school shopping and he is missing. Also, he should have had an inheritance test done on himself and Jason. if his mother was a prostitute his father's line could be anyone -even a family now extinct that he could claim!


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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 04, 2007
    This story is very cool. Very original. Hope to see more updates.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on January 03, 2007
    ch5: Very intriguing: this story takes an idea, runs with it, and takes the reader on a ride. Loved the Library.

    Well written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2007
    more, and when is he going back to hogwarts, is he going to have a resorting?
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  • From ANON - downdilly on July 29, 2006
    Fascinating, can't wait to see what Harry gets up to next, and the possiblities for Jason the Urchin are endless.

    Thank you for sharing.

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  • From ANON - Ox King on June 30, 2006
    Great story idea. I had a blast reading, but I'm sad now. I ran out of chapters to read. New chapters soon please. Thanks.
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  • From Reamar on June 20, 2006
    An impotence curse?! That was so funny, all in all I really love where this fic is going and I can't wait to read more. You said you needed a beta? I am a pretty good beta, especially with grammar. Since it's summer I'll have all the time in the world, so consider me!
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  • From ANON - JJ on February 01, 2006
    Interesting so far. Your Harry is very individual so far.
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  • From ANON - jw on January 31, 2006
    that a great update cant wait to see what he does next
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on January 31, 2006
    Thisss isss turning out to be an awsssome ssstory, pleassse continue.
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  • From ANON - Shady on January 31, 2006
    Loving it so far, can't wait to see what Harry gets up to.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    Can you explain please, pregnant with squid? and a hint, very few people use the word luncheon, they usually abreviate it to lunch, especiallymin speech.

    Good story by the way
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  • From ANON - Treck on January 31, 2006
    Well. You are off to a good start. I hope you update regularly.
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  • From ANON - Random Individual on January 31, 2006
    Very interesting story you've started here. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on January 31, 2006
    Still excellent, and now he has a willing dark shadow to do his bidding. We await.
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