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Reviews for Re-run

By : selenepotter
  • From Rocky235 on August 13, 2007
    No other author makes me look up as many new words as you do. "Arquebuses", is just an example. I'm trying to remember all of them for my next Scrabble game. Not that I could ever use arquebuses. Ha!
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  • From Rocky235 on August 13, 2007
    Your idea of Luna writing to Albus and just saying Stubby was inocent and telling him about Wormtale was great. I can't tell you how many stories I've read where it takes Harry 3 chapters and and a lot of intrigue to get Padfoot out.

    Thank you for sharing your talent and hard work.
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  • From Rocky235 on August 13, 2007
    Other than telling you that I'm enjoying your story I'm not too good at reviews.

    I don't see any typos, (I'm probably not as eagle eyed as some though. lol)
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  • From MrGalion on February 19, 2007
    I would Have To say this is your best Fic - But I feel you rushed it too much. Or Is that just me wanting more?
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  • From ANON - Lothous on January 01, 2007
    great cant wait for more from any story lookin to the future

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  • From ANON - more on December 19, 2006
    more story pleezzz
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  • From ANON - Loziliozal on December 04, 2006
    love the story cant wait til the new stuff comes out ur fan
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  • From ANON - lothous on November 27, 2006
    great story and i must say verry ingenious

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2006
    You have turned Luna into a Marysue. If you are going to have her with all this knowlege, you need to show her developing her skills.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2006
    There are a lot of great ideas in this story but the way you have it written is more like a summmary than a real story. There is no flow to it, and very few details. Its kind of like you are just narrating it instead of letting teh story tell itself if that makes sense.
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  • From ANON - dan on October 24, 2006
    hmmmm,i wonder who the proffessor will be?? ;) this story, and the other one harry's harem ROCK!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - prettydelial on October 06, 2006
    I like this story, it is very original and enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - Cobra-100 on July 06, 2006
    Two things that I feel the need to bitch about. One is a composit of several smaller things and the other is one big thing. Why are you haveing this site host this fiction. There is nothing that would prevent FF.net from takeing it. Second aside form lackling massive pieces of the story that we would be better of with, what few pieces you do have are rushed at best. Further more you have made Luna into super Luna by giveing her a bunch of powers for no aperent reason. All this combined makes reading this fiction a chore rather than a pleasure. If I didn't realy like the pairing then I wouldn't be able to force myself to read this. When you have more experance under your belt feel free to rewrite this as the one thing you do have is a solid and uncommen idea.
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  • From ANON - Cristie on February 04, 2006
    I don't understand why you don't have more reviews, so I thought I would give you one. I like longers chapters but since I read all 8 at one time...wasn't a problem. I like the idea of a multiple personality within Luna....explains her spaceyness I guess

    Keep going with this fic and remember that this section usually doesn't have a lot of hits and even fewer reviews...don't let it get you down. I'll be reading more as you post them...but I might wait til there are a few of them at a time.
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  • From ANON - # on February 01, 2006
    so...is it luna who he marries?
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