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Reviews for My Mate

By : WynterRose
  • From ANON - Amessis on January 30, 2006
    Oh, that was lovely!
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  • From ANON - A Kira on January 30, 2006
    Oh WOW!!! That was a really well written chapter!! I really love the take on the creature feature! Write more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - angelstarfire on January 30, 2006
    First of all, this was great. ^o^ I love the first person POV... most people use third person, so it was a refreshing change. :) And I love creature fics, so you really couldn't go wrong with me as a reader... However, *winks* I did find a few things you might want to fix. I'm not trying to be mean, but you asked, and it's better to have people point these things early. :)

    "His arms were ready to pull me back down to his torn body. Blood was forming in small pools where I had bit him."

    Change 'bit' to 'bitten'

    I was never told that he would respond kindly to me after I all but rape him.

    Change 'rape' to 'raped'

    You mostly have problems with past-tense bits and pieces... but overall I found those two were the only ones that bugged me. :) For being un-betad, you did an excellent job. *glomps* And it was a sweet fic too... Anyhow, hope to read more from you! *toddles off*
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 30, 2006
    awwwh! that was the sweetest thing ever! *I'm totaly tuched. so firce and yet so gentle.
    great one shot. one of the best I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - LadyE on January 30, 2006
    Trying to figure out if you meant for this to be a one shot or not...
    and if the fic would lose some of its lustor if prolonged. Anyway, awsome job! Love it
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  • From ANON - ellelovemax85 on January 30, 2006
    Loved it, though I do wish it would have been more then on chapter. Any ways great job.

    Elle the Evil one
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  • From ANON - Plague on January 30, 2006
    Holy Shit!!! You really did a get job with it.
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