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Reviews for Patented Daydream Charms

By : Padfoot
  • From nonentity on February 26, 2007
    Actually, I really like the ending--their thoughts on each other and Hermione noticing Ron.
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  • From Ravensblood on February 25, 2007
    I do really want to claw your eyes out for the ending... but you leave everything nice and wide open for a sequel when they get together after the war and you don't even have to do much in the way of exposition because this story is here.... I'm pleading with you! You can't just leave it at this????? Oh god, would someone please KILL RON????

    P.S. I love your writing style and all, you are an excellent story-teller!!!!
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 03, 2006
    JK Rowling would be proud at how well you followed the storyline. you misplace anything! I absolutely adore your writing.
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  • From ANON - Jessi on November 27, 2006
    haha i loved the story it made me laugh at the end..hahaha i thought that it was funny because the entire time i was reading the stoty i never thought that it was going to end like that. yay! a twist
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2006
    absolutely brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2006
    I think it's awesome that it goes along with HBP so well. Good story.
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  • From ANON - Regina Malfoy on August 14, 2006
    I really liked this story because alot of people dismiss that HBP happend... but you were like right in there with it! I love that; it was definatly satisfying. Ive read a fair few of your stories and I love your writing. Keep it up and I will gladly keep reading. I remember reading Why Draco Should Not Be Using Tampons... it was basically the first Draco/Hermione fanfiction I ever read. So thank you for being an author and thank you for being there for me.
    Looking forward to more,
    Regina
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on August 14, 2006
    Great story. Hope to read more of your work in the future.
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on August 14, 2006
    Das war ein echt hei
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on August 14, 2006
    Wonderful! Really great idea to have Hermione day-dreaming. I held my breath throughout the dream and couldn't stop grinning after she had woken from it. This first chapter was highly entertaining. I'll go and read the others as well.

    However, before I do so, let me just say one more thing: thank you, thank you so much for your well-written fanfic. It's so nice to read a fic where the author knows about the meaning of orthography and correct grammar. There are so many sadly lacking this feat.

    Okay, excuse me know. I have a fic to read. ^-^

    Cira
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  • From ANON - somegirl on August 14, 2006
    You know, normally I would not review for stories. But I jsut had to for this one.

    I am a big fan of yours. I really am, but this story just dissappointed me. It lacked a lot of zest, it was just a bunch of sex stories stringed together and that got old really fast. It wasn't fun, it wasn't kinky, and I didn't laugh like I did with your other stories. Did something happen?

    Best wishes to your next story.
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  • From ANON - Julie on August 14, 2006
    Way to ruin a story with a crappy ending. This was such a dissapointment. I wish I could have the time back that I spent reading this fic but I can't. Best I could do is leave this review.
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  • From ANON - mona on August 14, 2006
    very well done!! i loved it. i wish they could have ended up together, perhaps if you feel inspired enough you might take us into what would be hermione and draco's point of veiw during the 7 book. that would be a really nice read. you are one of my fave authors on here, love your stuff. hope there is more to this story but do know it was a great read it is hard to capture them right and you do it. thanks!!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on August 13, 2006
    I really love how you put this in canon. I kept waiting for the big diversion of fate, but you did it! Good job, liked what you did, it was interesting.
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  • From PinkTribeChick on August 13, 2006
    Please, oh, please, oh please . . . tell me there's going to be some sort of sequel where he figures out how he feels about her . . . and things get worked out and they end up together . . . cause this was seriously an ODD (and possibly wrong) place to end this story . . .
    MORE PLEASE! 8~D
    ~ptc~
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