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Reviews for Patented Daydream Charms

By : Padfoot
  • From MahoganyMarauder on November 04, 2012
    One of the best fics I've ever read. :D It was so amazingly compatible with the canon that it can ACTUALLY be canon. Good job! Although the ending was really depressing--as the canon was, actually--it made it seem more real for me. I honestly DESPISE the whole Ron-Hermione pairing, and it's really refreshing to find a fic that's both compatible with the canon and also encourages the Dramione pairing. And even if JKR herself despises the whole idea of Draco and Hermione, I really LOVE and SHIP this pairing so much. Thank you for this!

    P.S. This fic reminds me so much of the song "Second Chance" by Faber Drive. The lyrics "Instead of holding you/I was holding out/I should have let you in/But I let you down/You were the first to give/I was the first to ask/Now I'm in second place/to get a second chance" and "What you give is always what you get/There's so much I haven't given yet/If you could give another second chance" are SOOOOO Dramione. Maybe you could do a fic that goes beyond the epilogue that will portray Draco going back to Hermione. :D I really love your writing style, and I'd really love to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Helga on August 04, 2011
    Love, love, loveee your writing!! Really great on the humor and details. Especially this story with the steamy daydreams is steamy and witty. And a giant cookie for the amazing speed with updates and complete story.
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  • From ANON - oktobur on July 23, 2011
    I LOVED THE STORY...!! The ending, well, you guessed it. BUT THE STORY WAS ABSOLUTELY a JOY TO READ! :D
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  • From on July 17, 2011
    I just thought I'd let you know that there's something up with the formatting and such, and everything is all spaced pout and strange. Other than that, AMAZING. Just..... Gah! *shiver* Amazingly full of wonder. I'm eager to read more!
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  • From mlui on January 31, 2009
    I really enjoyed reading this story. Will there be a sequel of when they're older and in the future?
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    wow - a very deep story actually. very good. I do despiser Ron though - he's such a git and so doesn't deserved Hermione. I liked it - too bad they didn't end up together but you kept it canon so well.
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    well, I like how real you made it -- that is a first time experience.
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    I love Draco in this -- he's tired, withdrawn, preoccupied and overwrought with emotions he won't give validity too. Throw in those Charms and Hermione and what a show. And Hermione just made a huge OOPS! I love how you opened Draco's eyes about others after seeing Hermione cry --
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    Oh poor blind hermeione..it's Draco you want.
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    FINALLY some real life interaction....awesome.

    Love cheeky Draco.
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    I like how he took control at over the situation with courtesean Hermione - very sexy. So she sent him one, she didn't mess with it though. HMMM - so interesting.
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    I just noticed that there hasn't been actual penetration (did I just write that?). There's oral, hand and other but no actual intercourse - is there a reason for that?


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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    YOU GO HERMIONE! Ok, let's seriously discuss this Draco fixation -- what is up with that? How is that possible? There's more to this than meets the eye.
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  • From margaritama on December 11, 2008
    I'm just cracking up that they are all Draco so far....and it's only chapter 2. LOL
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  • From salparadise on September 21, 2007
    I know this story was written a long time ago, and I doubt that you'll see this review, but I have to leave it anyway. This is probably my favorite story on this website. You are a terrific writer; very funny, as well as able to capture emotions and thoughts very well. I loved the ending, as well as the moral of the story: it was bittersweet, and realistic. I think everyone goes through the realization that feeling wanted, and sexy isn't what defines a person, and that you must learn to like yourself for other reasons, and you summed that up very well. So, anyway, thank you for your story. =p
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