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Reviews for Releasing the Pressure (Completed/Revised)

By : ecco1983
  • From ANON - Joshua on July 05, 2006
    I absolutely love this story. Seeing Remus being more animalistic in his sex is very sexy and very hot. I've mentioned before at other stories that you may want to do more showing and less telling, and that applies to this story as well. Also, I'd like to have seen it drawn out a bit longer with more description or dialogue or something. Very hot, but also very short. Another thing is that Remus is all hot and bothered and pretty much ripping his clothes off, but then when he enters Sirius, he "moved slowly, carefully, in and out of Sirius." In his condition, would he be able to think enough to take it easy at first? I mean, I know if he doesn't, it'll be painful, but with the animal coming out in him, would he think of that or just do what he had to do to get off? Still, a very, very nice story. :D
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  • From ANON - Kira on June 15, 2006
    :giggles: I've always loved this pairing - thanky for writing this!!
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