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Reviews for One in pain

By : Sheerah
  • From Ravensnape on April 20, 2013
    So far I like it if you would please keep writing when you can I'd love it . I can't post any of mine threw my iPod so I'm reading others.
    So again love the story just wish there was more . Oh and I do not trust the women she reminds me
    Of the witch in hancal and grettle
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  • From Avivafae on March 02, 2009
    So you get all the way to chapter 10 and then quit? It's too good a story to just here and rot. Please go back to it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - jamie on August 27, 2006
    I really love this story, I hope that you will be writing more in the future.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Tataru on October 25, 2004
    OH, such a sad fic, please don't end it there. I want to know that Hermione ss tos to heal and gets better.
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  • From ANON - Mishkin on August 28, 2004
    Fantastic!!!! please update soon and when you do d yod you please send me it via email? i'm really enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - Talia on July 04, 2004
    This is such an awesome story, I am BEGGING YOU please write more!! I'll Stand on my head in Jello if you will!!
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  • From Draven on May 24, 2004
    Ok you so can't leave your readers hanging out on a limb here! Please keep updating! It's an extremely awesome story so far! Please continue!

    Blessed be and Luv,
    *~*MorbidAngel*~*
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  • From ANON - Morbie on May 09, 2004
    Thus far, it has a solid plot base, but you seem to be dragging it out. I don't know if this is from writters block, or what have you, but I'd be more please with this story if the chapters were more "complete thoughts" rather than fragments, but I am not a fan of the "cliffies" at all. Overall, I think you've got a good idea and should stay on it, but as I said, I'd like a more complete chapter, a full scene with foreshadowing towards a later or next scene, the chapters seem very choppy they don't quite flow into each other, but I would like to see this story complete, and will continue to read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2004
    Poor Mione.... I can't belive it..... but it's a great story, and keep wrighting!

    R
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 08, 2004
    This is a very sad story, but it's wonderful.
    Poor Hermione...

    Anna
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  • From ANON - amethystangel on March 11, 2004
    I've had the first 7 chapters sitting in my comp forever, and finally started digging things out. Came back to find new chapters. Keep them ng ang and I'll keep visiting. It's great!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 09, 2004
    Chapters 1-9... I just read what you have done of this story & am hoping that you will be able to add more soon!!! I am very curious to see what ens ens when they find out that Hermione is gone!!! Will Severus realize that he cares even more so than he already has addmited to himself? Where is her father? Can't wait to find out!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^
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