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Reviews for Weft of Power, Warp of Blood: A Tapestry of Desire

By : CMW

From ANON - witte heks on September 11, 2008
Wow, I am speechless... I have just finished reading your story. It is brilliant!!! It is so well written and I love your characters. What a fantastic idea to bring Sirius back and your Snape is sooooo yummy!!!! I have just spent the last three days in absolute bliss reading this story and it is definately the best i've read in a long long time. Please, Please carry on writing like this. The next chapter can't come soon enough.I am totally addicted to this story!!!.....WELL DONE.
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From ANON - Jennifer on July 13, 2008
I have spent all of my free time in the last two days reading your story and I just wanted you to know that I am really into it. I really find it a good companion/background to the actual HP story that I can see it folding in really well. I like the fact that it doesn't focus on the Golden Trio as much as the others that come into the story. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story and I hope you update it again soon. Please keep writing and I hope your muse doesn't fail you.(I like that you found a way for Sirius to come back and try again with Jasmine.)

Looking forward to more,
Jennifer
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From waltonarey on November 16, 2007
Fun story! Great character development. Hope to see more chapters soon!
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From lizziek on November 12, 2007
Hey there, I meant to say in my earlier review that the story's categorization may be depressing the number of readers/reviewers you have been getting. People have their favorite characters and with so many stories here, they often stay within certain character's sub-categories. I don't know if it's possible, but if you added this story to one or more additional categories like Sirius/OFC and Snape/OFC, you would probably increase your readership significantly.

Just a thought - I really don't know if it's possible to add categories once a story is up and running. I hope so, it's a really terrific one and deserves more readers.
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From lizziek on November 02, 2007
Wow! I've spent the last couple of nights reading this story. It is now 3:36 a.m. but I couldn't stop. Your characters are beautifully realized, the plots and settings are perfectly executed, your dialogue is natural and true-to-life. It's just a wonderful, engrossing read. Siriusly (that's my one) it's a hell of a yarn. And it's nice to see Sirius get some - he's so fantastic and so often overlooked. I *knew* he couldn't just be dead behind that veil! I've always wanted to know more about the veil so I'm really glad you went there.

I adore your OFCs, though I'm surprised Snape let Jasmine get away. It's nice that you made him a good father although I think that ill-tempered goat is having a bad effect on Arielle's temper. I look forward to Snape's adventures with his virginal and suddenly extremely horny assistant. Lucius' plans for her have piqued my interest as well.

I can't wait for more - my hat's off to you. It's an amazingly good story.
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From reirei on September 17, 2007
Please, please continue!!!!!! More Snape & Kiaya. Loving it.
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From reirei on September 17, 2007
Sorry I have not reviewed before, your story is unbelievably well spoken and gripping. So much so that I will pass chapter after chapter in search of an ending without reviewing. Believe me, you surpass most writers that I have seen and I am eager for more.
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From Saharah on January 25, 2007
Oh! And I'm sorry for not reviewing each chapter as I went, but that really is your own fault. You made the thing so damned interesting, I was clicking the 'next chapter' button with incredible impatience to see what would happen next.
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From Saharah on January 25, 2007
Holy....
Ok, so.. I only just found your story.
Well, honestly, I found it three sleepless days ago. It's a bit long, haha.
Wow. I mean.. seriously... Wow. First of all - you write amazingly well. It was like reading a real, published novel. One that I couldn't put down! Twists and turns of the plot, the way you followed the HP books with just a hinting tease as to what was going on in the world beyond what you wrote, and your characterization all leave me thoroughly impressed. Especially the characterization!! You not only went along and expanded the already-defined personalities of the more familiar characters, but you really delved into the traits of the people you created from your head, and kept loyally to them. I really can't tell you how impressed I was - you even kept your characters true to the discriminations of the time [werewolves, and the mild Harry Potter hero-idea (like when Jasmine couldn't believe she had him fetch things for her, etc.)]
I also laughed so hard at various bits. My absolute favorite line in the whole thing is where Sirius is a shade and says proudly, "I'm a conundrum!". OH! Speaking of Sirius - The way you brought him back was bloody brilliant. It didn't seem at all disjointed in the story, it wasn't predictable (which was amazing.. usually you see it coming a mile away in fanfictions, but I was struck dumb with shock when I read 'I'm not dead.'), and frankly.... it made me extremely happy. haha.
I also loved how you described Jasmine's clothes, and the histories you created behind charms work and so on. Your story is so thorough!!
I'll stop gushing and move along now, but I HAD to tell you how wonderful your story is. I'm extremely jealous of your innate writing talents, haha. I can't even whine to you about Sirius and Jasmine's predicament, because it's so well done - depressing as it is :P
I'll be checking back for more no doubt; thank you for writing this!
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From ANON - vanina on October 14, 2006
Well, this is going to be mostly spamistic but I just can't help it:
ZOMG! HE IS BACK!!!! *squeeee!*
I've slowly but confidently been pacing through your fic, and thought I'd review to let you know you hooked me from the start, but for reasons unknown I couldnt read it all toghether. I picked it up every once in a while knowing I'd have a good reading ensued, but I just can't wait to see how you follow up now!

I can't wait to see Sirius and Jasmine looking in each other's eyes again, I know, duh, the obvious, hee. But that tension between Snape/Kaya 's got me on the edge of the chair every time, and the Centaur has completely charmed me too. Also, I loved the scene with Remus and the Mirror of Erised, I swear I could see him, very well written, his expretions and corporal language, and the interactions with the other carachters...*nods nods nods*
I know I'm forgetting a thousand things, your way of writing is very singular I think, I haven't read that much fics so as to compare much, but is what I noted. It requiers certain concentration, you have this sentences and vocabulary and link them in a way that is really captivating, though it might be only my PoV :/ , I wouldn't know perhaps?
I don't know if I make sence to you, sorry heeh, I know there was *this* sentence that I *loved* and thought "Woa" but can't quite place it now, I'll make sure I look back and find it to do a proper review.
I also like the ironies and the paradoxes and the drama, Narcissa/Lucius, Bella, Nagini's PoV and all the miths, Snape and his mind, how you get into it...Aagain, I'm not mentioning *a lot* of things, I hope I'll do a proper review sometime. You've been doing a great great work, be sure of it, excuse my lateness and inconstance!
I'm off to see whats next!
Cheers,
Vani.
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From ANON - mazey2 on September 25, 2006
^_^...psst...*update*
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From ANON - Jen on September 07, 2006
I just thought I'd leave you comment to show you my appreciation for this wonderful fic you've created. It's a shame most are either too lazy or didn't bother straining their rapidly depleting brain cells for a long fic.

I've read this in three days, it's been my reward for finishing my college work before it's too ungodly late. :) I think you are brilliant. No, let me rephrase that, I KNOW you are brilliant. And I'd love to see more soon... please? Heh.

I'll try to add you to my LJ tomorrow so I can keep an eye on that as well. *gives you a well deserved pat on the back*
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From ANON - ClairePendragon on July 30, 2006
Sooooooooo glad you updated! am sat nearly biting my coffee cup in half with anticipation!!!! Didnt mean to cause offence when i asked for a happy ever after.Sorry if i did, but keep on going its wonderful.

Claire
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From ANON - Leah on July 27, 2006
Im really really loving this story!!! The development of the relationships is slow enough to be believable but not so slow as to bore me. I REALLY like that you're focussing on characters that don't usually get much of a look-in without forgetting the Voldermort threat and the usual things tat happen in the Harry Potter universe. Each chapter is long so I know it's hard, but PLEASE update ASAP!!
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From ANON - ClairePendragon on July 17, 2006
Good as always, can't help wondering i there is a 'happy ever after'.
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