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Reviews for Weft of Power, Warp of Blood: A Tapestry of Desire

By : CMW

From ANON - Eva on February 02, 2005
I'm so excited to see you updating so quickly! Your chapters/updates are always so wonderfully detailed and long, I'm pleased and shocked to have so much of this story in such a short period of time.

As always, I adored this chapter. It also opened up a few things I've been waiting for: Sirius' comments regarding Remus and Hermione's close correspondence; I loved how each letter had their parting words just a little more open then the last ("sincerely yours", "love", etc), not to mention her unanswered question as to 'why because 16 is an issue'. I almost wished he hadn't brought it up, though, as now Remus' attitude towards her might change and who knows what that'll result in -- Hermione feeling upset because he's pulling away, confused, wondering why, maybe realising her feelings? It opens up a whole manner of angst and self-reflection. ;-) No matter my own prefence for Hermione pairings, I always had a soft spot for her and Remus. They understand each other and have so much going for them. It's really a very plausible pairing and easily justifiable.

Anyway, I haven't enough time for a long review as usual, so I'll have to leave it at that and express my joy at the prospect of another chapter next week. How wonderful!

Keep up the good work, as always. Your faithful reader,

- Eva
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From ANON - Sadie Hyde on February 02, 2005
Yay for update! I am so in love with this story. I love that your original characters are in fact *original* and seem so real that they fit right into the HP world seamlessly. (A Pun for Jasmine! ha ha!. Ok sorry that was pretty lame) What's going on with Remus? I like his correspondence with Hermione and it's very interesting to see Sirius chastising and reminding him that she's so young...a nice change of pace...lovely lovely . Can't wait to read more. And I love that the allergy is strawberries. Did you know that people who are allergic to peanuts are also allergic to cockroaches? Same protein in the exoskeleton. Sorry. Useless factoid, that.

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From ANON - Mal on January 29, 2005
I found this story only the day before yesterday and have read and read and read! Thank you so much for all the time and effort you've put into creating this intelligent and entertaining tale for us. The prologue captivated me totally, but I must say I was very surprised to find Snape having a wife - it's a first for me. It was also a first for me to read a story with Sirius the romantic lead, if that's a way to put it, but I like it! I enjoy all of your characterization, and if I'm to just mention one little favourite part, then it must be the scene with Kyara and Firenze in this chapter... it was perfect, innocent and outrageous at the same time. Snape's getting rid of the effects of the virility potion was memorable as well - you conveyed very well the urgent need, and the disgusting circumstances! And for something more pleasant... the love scenes between Jasmine and Sirius were very sexy and I hope there's a way for them to meet 'for real'. I also hope for more of Snape and Kyara - I'm getting very fond of her! I'm looking forward to next update!
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From ANON - Eva on December 05, 2004
I must have missed out on a chapter update, because I had two to read through! Not that I'm complaining, I adore this fic, it just took me extra long to be able to get to a point to review.

Where to begin? As the last chapter is more fresh in my mind, I'll recap my enjoyment of it instead;

Wow, what a chapter! I think the biggest/most interesting aspect was that of the end. Voldemort's amusing allergy and his refusal to admit it -- I can see why. The terror of the wizarding world nearly brought down by strawberries. What a scandal. Truly a fabulous addition to his character. The whole Nagini aspect was a little weird but as he had said to Bella, he's no longer human. Whether he's immortal makes no difference or not, but he's not human. He's become this.. other thing. And so it makes sense when coupled with his love affair with his snake. I adored her whispers of adoration and love with warm rocks and tall grass. I loved the imagery. It was really cute. :-)

Anyway, like I said, this is a fabulous fic and I'm enjoying it immensely. Sorry about the delay in updating. I'm still reading!

Good luck on the next chapter. I'm looking forward to it.

- Eva
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From ANON - Sadie Hyde on August 04, 2004
Thank God. Thank you, actually, for finally updating this wonderful tale. When I checked the reviews and realized that I hadn't already reviewed, I was very ashamed of myself because I remember reading this and absolutely loving it, it's in my recs section. Don't read my story, it's crap, but you can see that I recommended yours because I love it and I want more! I love the way you've captured the characters- they're just so right. I wish I had better words to express my admiration but it seems you've used them all up....

Keep up the fantastic work, and let me know where you get your shoes. They sound very cute.

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From ANON - Eva on July 30, 2004
What a lovely new chapter! I was thrilled to see your notification in my inbox yesterday but unfortunately had to wait until today to read it. But it was well worth the wait!

I do believe the parts I enjoyed the most were Kiaya and Severus' arguments and Jasmine becoming a dragon and needing Dumbledore to help change her back. However, watching Jasmine becoming more and more frazzled because of her relationship with [lack thereof of relationship with/hatred of] Sirius and the effect that's having on hew nerves is slightly worrying. Especially because she seems to be taking a lot of it out on Ari or being extremely short with her. While I don't question her reasons, I was almost glad to see Ari turn Jasmine into _anything_. Even though it ended with Ari's tears. Hopefully their relationship can mend once she either gets herself under control or finally succumbs to the inevitability of her and Sirius getting together! Or maybe I'm just hoping for too much; though I was right about the letter getting out, so maybe there's a chance I'm right on this. ;-)

Either way, I loved this chapter, as I've loved all your chapters and this entire story. People are still out here reading along, never question that fact. We will read with you all the way through until you can't write anything more. Or at least _I_ will, if that's any consolation. Keep up the good work, as always!

- Eva
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From ANON - Pauline on June 11, 2004
I hope your muse has not left, or you have lost interest in such an incredible tale. The let wer were brilliant!
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From ANON - Fortuna on June 03, 2004
Please continue!! I think we've all be a bit distracted lately, and I for one would love to see it through to the end. :-)
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From ANON - Evanescence on January 19, 2004
What a wonderful batch of letters. Somehow I had a tiny inkling that something would happen with _that_ letter. Very sneaky and wonderfully devious of you, oh wonul aul author CMW! I won't bemoan the length of time it took for an update as the sheer length of the update far outweighs the length of time the readers had to wait, especially in comparison to how much effort and time you put into these chapters.

I will thank you, though, for continuing to update and keep us faithful readers sated by this amazing plot and story. You weave an amazing Tapestry (I couldn't resist ;-) and I feel very priveledged to read this and follow along in the story's progression.

Keep up the good work and that means take your time! The readers aren't going anywhere, we all want to know what happens next.

- Eva
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From ANON - Kel on January 19, 2004
YAY! Glad you posted this--if you need me to beta, give me a yell. *g*

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From ANON - Evanescence on December 27, 2003
I'm quite surprised that Jasmine wasn't shredding up the letters and that she's replying to them, even if she'll never send them. Though I do wonder if they'll hold a purpose later on, as if Sirius or even Ari, when she's older, discovers them. Or maybe I'm just looking into this more than I should. ;-)

Either way, I'm anxiously awaiting a new chapter for this wonderful story. Keep up the good work!

- Eva
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From ANON - Evanescence on November 29, 2003
I'm still reading!

I absolutely love this story and only feel behind because I wasn't alerted you had updated. :-)

Keep up the good work!

- Eva
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From ANON - Zariva on November 25, 2003
Saying "Hi" and telling you to keep the good work up! ;)
Riva
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From ANON - Claribel on November 25, 2003
This is such a good story, I love your writing style and the plot is clever and intriguing. Have you moved away from the plot involving our canine friend or are you going for the AU? Just curious, I enjoy reading the story anyway, so please continue as you planned!
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From ANON - Kel on November 21, 2003
Keep going with it--it's very good. If you need a beta, give me a yell in IM. *g*
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