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Reviews for The Truth Behind The Past

By : lonlyheart
  • From ANON - amyordinary on January 12, 2007
    I like your story and look forward to an update... don't worry about taking awhile to update... we all know how real life can be... I hope that your health improves and that you are able to find a good job.. I know that's hard with today's market!
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  • From ANON - lolo on January 11, 2007
    good story, but kind of confusing
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  • From on January 03, 2007
    I began reading your story, but stopped because,
    contrary to my penname I can't handle rape stories.
    Yours has no rape warning and I'd appreciate one.
    I'm really squicky on that stuff and anyyone else
    who is deserves a warning beforehand. Please and
    Thank You.
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  • From ANON - Katharos on November 23, 2006
    I just found and read your story and I think it's fine. I usually don't like HP/DM stories but this is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - .-+ on October 15, 2006
    55+65
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  • From ANON - Lady Jueglerr on August 19, 2006
    "...and began to rape the boy." Idiot. Why the fuck would Vernon rape Harry? You didn't even explain the man's twisted state of mind. 'Began'? You are discusting with details. Most often, an abuser that beats one's children, or wards, will not rape the child while they are in a state of mind that longs for bloodshed. Even if they do, they do not 'begin to rape'. It is not that simple, and not something that can be glossed over like that. Secondly, the knife thing, eleven inches would go straight through Harry. The boy, I can assure you, is not that large. Dudley, is though. Maybe that plot point would work if they switched bodies? Also, if Vernon wanted to hit Harry's spine, he would have no trouble with it. It is not terribly difficult to pinpoint one's largest bone.

    Learn how to write, then maybe you won't get any more reviews like this. Maybe put some effort into your work, live up to the name that so many amazing authors create for us when they post on this website.

    Lastly, just to let you know that I'm not just some bitch with PMS, there is something I liked, Hedwig's state of mind. I loved how you used the term, 'beloved master.' That part, unlike the rest of it, was beautiful.

    That will be all.
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  • From ANON - Gina on June 21, 2006
    I am really enjoying this story. I also can't wait to read more.
    Thanks for the great read,
    Gina
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  • From ANON - juggenz1 on June 03, 2006
    I am really enjoying your story and hope you will continue. If you would email me when you update that would be great.
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  • From ANON - PixieWitch on May 31, 2006
    Okay, first of all, great premise for a great story. However, you obviously don't know how to write correctly. Your story lacks a lot of things including proper dialogue. Go back learn how to write like an evev half-way descent writer then you can try again. But I wouldn't suggest ever posting again on any site until you can. Especially if you continue to send out this drivel.
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  • From ANON - Afraidofreality on May 15, 2006
    please update already!! xD
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  • From ANON - Katrina on April 21, 2006
    Hey hon!

    great story so far. I like the plot line and all, but when you have people talking could you put in the "" it makes it easier to read in some places. Don't get me wrong, i love the story, but I have a little bit of problems knowing what is text and what is spoken.

    Cheers and keep up the good work!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Afraidofreality on April 21, 2006
    good story..
    Weird how harry and draco have the same background
    ahh well
    good luck
    x
    email me when u update

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  • From Aly on April 21, 2006
    First of all, I think that your story is promising. You have a great plot and all, and you are writing what makes you confrontable. You are writing your way and all and you know that. Come give yourself a pat on the back for doing a good job. You do your own work and you will be fine. But you are doing a great job for your story and all. But I can't wait until whats next. Keep the good work and if you have any comments and question or something like that, look me up from that directory. Like I said, keep up the work.

    Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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  • From ANON - jingko on April 21, 2006
    not bad, hope to read more later. and about the grammer, i really don't care, i didn't mind it. made sence to me, and who cares what the other blithers thingk any way.
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  • From ANON - D/H on April 21, 2006
    WTF is wrong with you?? Your story makes no sense and i just can't pic harry that weak, to be 'Raped' by his uncle, and just FYI, you need to put up WARNING ahead of time..

    I hate rape stories..It shows that the authors has not talent whatsoever, ehen it comes to creatititr or imgination...

    Your story is horrible and once i got to the rape part, i just couldn't believe it..I stoped and if i know that this story had raped in it, i wouldn't have
    read this TRASH!!!

    It's just that all of the other HP stories or allt he other stories are gone and there isn't much left to be read..The quality of the stories, anyway..
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