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Reviews for The Truth Behind The Past

By : lonlyheart
  • From ANON - Faye Everwyn on November 26, 2005
    I apologize for I don't usually say this but your story needs help. I have read so many stories that have had the potential to be great...if only they had taken the time to look it over and make the grammar, spelling, and tense correct. I believe your story has a lot of potential. Maybe a beta would be in order? I know I don't like to look over my own stories...I'm very lazy...>< I also understand that no one gets much of anything out of writing over the internet. That was my excuse when people complained about my stories. I would offer myself up to beta for you but as my situation is a smidge precarious...I would not be able to work right.
    Once again I apologize if I have offended you,
    Faye Everwyn
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl] on October 28, 2005
    I LIKe I like please please please update A S P
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  • From ANON - Amessis on October 27, 2005
    Well done again!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 27, 2005
    I'm glad they are going to pay for what they did. Can't wait for chapter 13!
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on October 22, 2005
    I love this story please please plesae please please please please please please please update A S P
    I Readlly like this.
    I can't wait to see what happens next.

    THANKS
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  • From ANON - mystery mystic on October 18, 2005
    I think draco's mother should be on the light side and that Ron and hermione will take Draco and harry's relationship very well and maybe severes's should be alive
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 18, 2005
    oooh im luving still--- :D :D more soon... bad Lucius!
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  • From ANON - linz on October 18, 2005
    awwww this is such a sad story yet oddly happy story. i think making Snape harry's father is a great idea. it is nice to see a softer side of him once in awhile. having dumbledore and mcgonagal married is interesting. please post more chapters soon i want to see what happens with harry/draco as well as with harry's relationship with his father
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 17, 2005
    Can't wait for chapter 9!
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  • From ANON - Missi on October 16, 2005
    I love this fic, I think Sirius should be alive, Severus should be in a relationship with the newly single OOTP member Narcissa, Ron should flip out over the H/D thing, and...yeah, I think that's it. Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Bonnie on October 02, 2005
    This is a great story. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Yukiko_xAkuma on September 05, 2005
    I think that Severus should be with Lucious and no Severus's mother should not be alive. Love the story so far please update soon.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 05, 2005
    I think.... Narcissa should be leaning towards the light but behind her son. Ron will be mad it's Malfoy. Hermione. Well flip a coin. Severus deserves to be happy!
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  • From ANON - thrnbroke on August 26, 2005
    It would be easier for Severus if he was still dead but it would be interesting to read the conflict if he was alive. But I leave it up to you! Can't wait for chapter 8!
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  • From ANON - Raya Knight on August 26, 2005
    interesting story. i've read alot of these snape-is-harry's-father stories and i look forward to seeing how you continue yours. my vote is for sirius being alive- i think it makes things more interesting but can also cause the characters and author more grief.
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