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Reviews for The Truth Behind The Past

By : lonlyheart
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 14, 2005
    Need chapter 6!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Drew on August 13, 2005
    Sirus Alive.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on August 13, 2005
    I love this story so far ^_^
    I think Sirius should be alive *nods*
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  • From ANON - Clau on August 12, 2005
    If Sirius is dead, I think the story would be a little too angsty (this coming from the girl who doesn't seem to see the end of angsty stuff). But at the same time, if Sirius is alive, it would be one more person to feel sorry for poor lil' Harry... this should be YOUR decision btw :P
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 12, 2005
    While I love the Sirius character I think he needs to be dead. Surely if he was alive he'd been watching after his godson and would have done something to those horrible muggles. Can't wait for chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - Clau on August 12, 2005
    Wow... all those coincidences! Ano... is Vernon going to pay by Severus' used-to-torture-people hands? Eh eh eh... Oh yeah! Your story is like thrown at the reader raw, everything happens so fast and you don't waste anytime anywhere. Take you time, relax and write as many details that comes to your mind as you can. ^^
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  • From ANON - kiria87 on August 11, 2005
    The story is great but you might try to change how you write the story so it isn't quite so forced and hard to understand. You could change the point of view when harry wakes up or at least use more personal pronouns and stay with each character a little longer. Other then that it's a great concept.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2005
    wow
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 08, 2005
    Can't wait for chapter 7. Or is that 5. Poor Harry!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrook on July 29, 2005
    Oh.... I can't wait for part 4!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on July 29, 2005
    more soon please
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 15, 2005
    The story is very good. Still think you need a beta. Can't wait for chapter 6.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on February 28, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 3! Severus is Harry's father? Why does he look like James? Albus and Minerva are his grandparents? He's a pureblood? Holy moly! That happens next?
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