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By : nera
  • From ANON - E.J on January 24, 2006
    I actually like your story it
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on January 24, 2006
    Although there are small errors, I willingly excuse them all for two reasons, 1) English is a second language for you, and I have struggled to use another language every day very frustratingly, and 2) your Draco is hot as hell. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Spoutnik on January 23, 2006
    More!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LCDrusilla on January 23, 2006
    It sounds like you're off to a good start but its hard to read your formating I get confused. Keep going though because this is gonna get REAL good.
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  • From ANON - Rachael on January 23, 2006
    hey there - i just wanted to say that im really enjoying your story and that i hope you will continue it . . after reading your author notes i just wanted to say that people should understand that fanfiction is harder to do in english if its not your first lanuage and i just wanted to say that you, and everyone that posts fanfiction is brave in the first place for posting them - cuz believe it or not they are a lot of lurkers who enjoy them all = ) . . if you need a beta ( im not the best beta out there but i think i could suffice ) ill be happy to try and help you, just leave a note and i can give u an e-mail address . . but anyways, i hope we get some hot draco/hermione smut lol and again, i like your story and hope for more = )
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  • From ANON - in on January 23, 2006
    ohhhhhhh NO! Dont stop it here! update soon...
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on January 23, 2006
    ur mean tto just stop like that lol well i hope u update really soonn
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  • From ANON - Antanaqui on January 23, 2006
    BAD STOPPING POINT! You also have quite a few spelling errors, so you might want to check that. Hurry up and update because as I just said BAD STOPPING POINT!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 23, 2006
    That was pretty good. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shibia on January 23, 2006
    Much better now with the capitalization. Especially for non-English readers.
    Very intriguing story, already several chapters and I still don't know where it'll lead. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2006
    yowsers. me likes!
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  • From ANON - Spoutnik on January 22, 2006
    keep going!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 22, 2006
    I thinkit is a good story. I think the only thing that you need though is a BETA. Because the grammer is messed up, but other than that; this is a good story so far. Nice plot.
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  • From ANON - Lily on January 22, 2006
    I think it's very good. I can't wait for more. Your English is better than a few people I know and they learned it growing up, so I think it's quite an accomplishment to know more than one language. I wish I did, I'm working on one, but it's not there yet. Post soon please!
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  • From ANON - Bree on January 22, 2006
    I knew when I first started reading this that English probably wasn't your first language... And that I find impressive. Seeing as how English is my first and only language and I still wouldn't be able to put my words together as well as you... My grammar may be more correct, but that's about it. So overall I'm impressed and I like the story so I hope that you are encouraged enough to continue. Thanks :)
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