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Reviews for it will never happen...it can\'t

By : nera
  • From donovanwitch on January 22, 2006
    This is an awesome story! I never would have imagined anything like this. Please keep writing and you must tell what is going to happen between the two of them. I think Draco is going literally insane. I think they should both get over any differences and just try and see how a relationship will turn out....but they probably will :). Anyway, great work, keep it up, and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - luna luck on January 22, 2006
    great story keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2006
    OMG I love this story, You must must must update soon. Cant wait to read the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on January 21, 2006
    omg u have to conntinue. i love it . well till next time
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  • From ANON - Carol on January 21, 2006
    ahh! how could you stop there!! please update!! I like the story, let them still fight. i love it when they are pasionate, love and fight.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    ah yay! love the story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    The problem is not with the structure of your sentences. The problem with your writing is more punctuation than syntax. One specific thing that kept jumping out at me and that really messes with the flow of the story is your use of two commas as initial quotation marks. This is quite simply not a punctuation mark in English.
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  • From ANON - in on January 21, 2006
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    awesome story! keep at it!!
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  • From ANON - nessie on January 21, 2006
    I like this story but I was away when it came out so I couldn't review. Please continue I like how the story moves.
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  • From ANON - Shibia on January 21, 2006
    If you want readers, pay attention to your typo. As such the story is very diificult to read and is tiring for the eyes. Add caps when needed, and try to find another way to mark the dialogues. So far, the story looking interesting but, I can't follow a single installement in one session because of the typography used.
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  • From ANON - Abby on January 21, 2006
    Please keep writing
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    i love it, defintiely keep writing it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    ur story is great keep going!
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  • From ANON - marta on January 21, 2006
    please continue, it's great story and i want more! please don't stop :) i'm from Poland and i'm not so good in englisch, sorry for mistakes :).
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