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Reviews for it will never happen...it can\'t

By : nera
  • From ANON - dark_samira on January 21, 2006
    Don't even think to stop it!
    Please!
    I read it and liked it from the beginning but I'm too busy in these days, I just have time to read something and go back to study, so I didn't leave reviews!

    I can't speak for others but I'm sure there are others who like it but don't leave anything.
    I mean, it's not possible this story has no followers!
    It has plot, the characters have depth, and there
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  • From ANON - Ev on January 21, 2006
    Yes, FINISH
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  • From ANON - Dragonfly on January 21, 2006
    The story itself is rather interesting, and I would like to continue reading it. However you do have a major problem with basic grammer skills. Much of the story isn't capitilized or punctuated correctly. I think this holds many people back from enjoying your story and you would be much better received if you improved this. I would suggest finding someone to edit it for you. I hope this was helpful. And don't worry, you're not the first writer to suffer from grammatical mistakes.
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  • From ANON - ladyknyght on January 21, 2006
    Hi. I like your story. And I love the point that Draco killed his father!!! Run with it some more. There is truly a nice, romance getting started here. Maybe the two of them need something to work on together. :-)
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  • From ANON - Brown_Eyed_Girl on January 21, 2006
    Hey come on keep going! Dont stop now! It's gettin really xcitin!!!!:) It's really freaking good!!!!!!!!!!!! I really wanna know whats gonna happen next go come on dont keep me with anticipation! You're a great writer. Neva 4get that!
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  • From ANON - lusi on January 21, 2006
    hi,i m read yoru story and it is perfect. ilove it. but ı am selfish and i was nat write review... but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue to write.. it is perfecttttttttttt
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    I like your story and do hope that you continue. I think your writting style is different. You just gave away a nice plot point, finally and hopefully will see a greater interest due to that.
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  • From ANON - lala on January 20, 2006
    better sentence structure..its weird how your doing it...do it normally

    other then that good story


    -lala
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on January 20, 2006
    Hey love it so far hope u update soon
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  • From ANON - Tymberwolf on January 20, 2006
    I like your story I really hope that you keep it up.I would hate for you to top it.
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  • From ANON - Christy on January 20, 2006
    I really like this story, and you should absolutely continue! I can't wait for another chapter! This story is so exciting!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    I haven't read your story, honestly. I clicked on the reviews to get an idea of what is was and saw that you were apparently thinking of discontinuing it, so I read your author's note.

    It might be a great story, but I generally don't read things that start off the way yours did (improper punctuation, first sentence not capitalized). It just doesn't bode well, and most people don't have time to read every story that is posted here.

    This isn't really a critique of your writing. Just letting you know that if you want more people to read, you should probably make sure that everything goes through a beta and is polished before posting, otherwise it might be passed by, despite being a possibly good story.

    Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    I VERY much would like for you to continue this story. The characters are kinda AU but so interesting please finish the story:)
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  • From ANON - Lily on January 20, 2006
    I like your story. please continue it. I just hadn't seen it before. I want to know what happens to Hermione now that she knows that Draco killed his father. Please more soon
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 20, 2006
    I love your story and i want you to finish it or at least write more so i can read it... Please dont stop writting it

    Angel
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