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Reviews for Miscalculations

By : JanusEris
  • From ANON - Rawben on May 12, 2006
    noo! it's not over is it?? omg! i love this story!! it's great!!!
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  • From ANON - Amelia on May 09, 2006
    Woow!! This was one of the First (long) slave fics I've read. That was Actually Really GOOD!!! (Recently 4 some reasone I find myself drawn towards post-war slave fics. Even though I hate reading depressing, dark & OOC fics, as most often other slave fics tend to be). So imagine my utter delight at having found this gem of a fic of UR's!^_^!!! I mean not only was it believable. The characters Actually seemed to come to life! Making the whole fic extraordinarily Vivid & Real!!!!!! I mean I have been reading 4 the past 2 and a half hours!!! & All I can say is Please Do Me a HUGE Favor: " WRITE M-O-R-E"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I definately hope that this wasn't the end of Ur Amazing fic & that U Will Update SOON !!!!!!!!!*Not-So-Subtle-HINT-HINT*!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~
    P.S. I thought Ur spelling & grammer were quite good (I was only ably to catch 1 or 2 mistakes in all these chapters. Which is a lot more than I can say about most of the fics I've encountered so far). So in short Please WRITE MORE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - KeyKeeper12 on May 01, 2006
    I like this story. As for the English, don't fret over it. I've read and written worse on many occasions. I will be interested to see how Harry gets around the ministry noticing that Snape has a wand. I'm sure you've helped him to think of something brilliant, and I look forward to reading more. Until then,

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - the_minx_17 on April 20, 2006
    This has been very enjoyable! I'm looking forward to the rest.
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  • From ANON - shinigami-chan on April 19, 2006
    intresting... it's not what i exspected though i most defantatly enjoyed this.

    more? please?


    shinigami-chan
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  • From ANON - l\'etje on April 17, 2006
    this a very very good story one of the best i have read so far and i have already read a lot of stories
    sp keep going and post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Amessis on April 16, 2006
    Oh god, he's going to break poor Draco.
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  • From ANON - avihenda on April 16, 2006
    wow! godrics hollow is back! great chapter. You had me sitting at the edge of my seat the hole chapter. Great work!
    I'll be looking forward to your next chapter, for ever and ever :-)
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  • From ANON - Lanta on April 16, 2006
    I really love this story, I'm a big fan of slave fics lol, and this is a well-written one. I love your portrayal of Severus. I have to admit though, I'm a little confused by this latest chapter, but hopefully the next will clear things up.

    I can't wait for the update, lol. I check this story at least once a day if not more to see if there's a new chapter (which is a little obsessive I admit, but still). I love it.
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  • From ANON - Afraidofreality on April 16, 2006
    Im sorry i have so say
    I hate this story
    its so depressing
    its just..why couldnt harry potter be happy,
    why did u make him mean
    WHY!!

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  • From ANON - Afraidofreality on April 16, 2006
    This storys really depressing and horrible, good writeing but,
    what a sad story line:(
    when u write some happy storys let me know:)
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  • From ANON - avihenda on April 07, 2006
    wow, this chapter was really long! I've missed this fic soooo much! *tears of joy*
    I'm so happy I found the hp new archive. They really should say something about it on the main site. I totally missed it for ages and ages.
    Great to see you're back! If you keep adding chapters, I will keep reading and reviewing :-) allways.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on April 06, 2006
    Well done! I just wish there was something they could do to get rid of the government- start their own revolution! You can see how Harry is changing with all of this, I worry about all of them.
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  • From ANON - Echelon on March 15, 2006
    ooh! Im loving this story so far and you posted an extra long chapter this time THANK YOU! :p. I really like your style of writing and I cant wait to see how you advance this plot. Oh and can I just say another Thank You for bringing Snape into their household. I usually dont like it when he's in HD fics, but he fits so perfectly in this one... Anyway, I hope you update soon, as I can feel the cravings for this story beginning even now :D
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  • From ANON - Jesse on January 19, 2006
    @_@
    What a PERFECT chapter! OH MY, you are a genius!! This is one of the best slavery fic EVER!! Please update again soon? I MUST read what happens next! I hope Draco feels this way on the next morning. Hugs!
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