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Reviews for Left Out

By : GertrudeFlint
  • From ANON - Point on February 28, 2014
    I honestly dont know if I should feel sorry for percy or not.
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  • From ANON - Pluma Desatada on May 26, 2011
    this fic was simultaneously really hot, heartbreaking and so true.
    I really feel for Perce, I really do.
    (Me = nerd and virgin until 21 but not because "i was saving myself" exactly... just no one would ask me. I had to go hunt down some dick myself...)
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  • From ANON - Nee on June 27, 2010
    Hi. I read this story awhile ago, sometime in March. Anyway, I forgot where I had read your story, but I just kept thinking about it and how weird it was for me to feel sorry for a boy not to have been molested by his father. It just kept playing in my head, over and over, that I had to read it again. I eventually found it again and I knew that I must send you a review just for the simple fact of making me wonder if Percy was really loved in that family or if there was something about him that distanced him from his father. I kept trying to figure out what it was about Percy that was untouchable and what it was about his brothers that made them fair game. It also made me wonder when the sex started happening and if Ron was already participating or if he would be skipped over due to his friendship with Harry Potter.

    Well, whatever the answers, I just wanted to say that you wrote a very successful story. I felt sorry for Percy and turned on by the sex. I could literally imagine Percy becoming colder and more withdrawn as he realizes that he's the only son that had not experienced that side of their father (Not including Ron. You never mentioned him beyond the first sentence). So, thanks for writing a story that screwed with my head and my beliefs about a proper family dynamic. I don't think I have come across another story like this before that involves incest. It was an interesting read and it definitely had an interesting effect on me. Thanks so much and I would love to see a sequel in the future about how Percy deals with his realization.
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on July 18, 2009
    That was...interesting... Disturbing, but different. I think I liked it. Which shocks me. Nicely done.
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  • From malfoyrulespotterdrools on June 29, 2009
    MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!
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  • From MiriuOniaya on June 26, 2008
    Oh god, I loooooved this!! Can't think of anything else to say, cause I'm all happy smiley and stuff, but I loved it!!
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  • From JaceDamian23 on May 31, 2008
    what a hot story
    aww poor percy
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  • From on July 12, 2007
    One word...Hollyfuckenshitthatsot
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  • From ANON - Ash on December 07, 2006
    I just wanted you to know that fred/george is the best pairing ever but i never would have thought of it with arther too. keep wrighting your amazing. This is one of the best stories ive read.
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  • From ANON - none on September 07, 2006
    that was...interesting
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  • From ANON - Jenny on August 23, 2006
    Well, that would certainly explain the row Percy had with his father in Book 5 (how he'd gotten so estranged from his parents that he could let his job come between himself and his family). Although I'd say it's a bit out of character for Arthur (maybe not for the twins), it was quite hot...I enjoyed it very much!
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  • From ANON - Sekre on August 02, 2006
    Aww, how sad! Good stuff though xD
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  • From ANON - Chris on July 15, 2006
    That was great! You caught two sexy, fun-loving 14 year-olds perfectly. Never mind Percy, let's have more boy fun.
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  • From ANON - Shardae on July 10, 2006
    Dang that was crazy..... I wonder if i would be a little crazy if i say it was wrong to leave Percy out like that....
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  • From ANON - Kisu on May 06, 2006
    Oh my God! That was bloody brilliant! Makes me wonder if Ron will get his turn...
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