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Reviews for Persuasions

By : MarianneWilde
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 19, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 23, 2007
    This is a great story. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. I hope that Hermione can be rescued by the Order or freed by Severus or Draco.
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  • From Snaperape on December 11, 2007
    I love it and can't wait till you add more chapters!! WRITE FASTER!!!! he he.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2006
    I just read Persuasions and was sad that there were only 4 chapters to the story and to see it's been awhile since u have updates the story. Please contact me when u are ready to update so I can be on the look out for the story.
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  • From ANON - lisa on August 18, 2006
    Poor Hermione and I got a little confused in ch 3 when draco entered and part of his conversation and the part where Snape comes was missing. Just thought I'd point it out. I like the story just the same though. Hope you update soon. I want to see if Hermione gets revenge and what happens between Snape, Draco and her.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Parmel on July 10, 2006
    I've read this twice and I'm not sure if I posted a review last time. I like this story and hope to get an update soon.
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  • From ANON - Afraidofreality on May 16, 2006
    omg update soon!!
    email me when you do please

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  • From magicalheather999 on May 14, 2006
    Poor Hermione...this is so horrible. I can only hope that Draco and Severus will put her together and not further tear her apart.
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  • From RyuaAlba on May 10, 2006
    So, you think it was Regelus too, huh?

    A deliciously naughty story to read. I rather enjoyed every bit of it! A couple spelling errors, but that's just your spellchecker messing it up, I think. I didn't see any grammar problems.
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  • From ANON - septentrion on May 10, 2006
    ch 4 : I think there's a chapter missing between ch 3 and 4. If Hermione isn't psychologically destroyed by Dolohov's and Nott's actions, then she's a very strong person. I wonder why Draco was shocked : was Hermione supposed to be safe from now on ? Please update soon !
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  • From ANON - glowing_haven on April 27, 2006
    OMG...I really think this story is great. Before anyone starts yelling at me that rape can't be good, I know that and I despise it, but nevertheless I think it's great written and hope for an update very soon.
    I wanna where you're taking the story from here and when Snape will appear in the picture.
    So please update very soon.
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  • From kateridemonica on April 16, 2006
    greetings! nice story you have there. i have to say i'm impressed, especially since english is not your first language. i would just like to point out a small problem in chapter 2, you have confused the words thigh (the upper part of the leg) and tight (the opposite of loose). there are some other very negligible mistakes, ones that are easily fixed. may i suggest getting someone fluent in english to check over your works? if you can't find anyone, i would be happy to help proof read. i love your plot, very good work.

    KaS
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  • From ANON - mekareami on April 13, 2006
    I am enjoying the story, but some of the words are rather confusing. I think perhaps the Word grammer editor was give too much leaway...

    Regardless, thank you for writing. I appreciate the time it takes to write for us.
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