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Reviews for Dark

By : Darknessmaster
  • From ANON - rectorlamia on July 05, 2006
    *shocked stupid* Neville and Dray, *hums* I womder, *goes to find other fics to read after yours* great first chapter by that way. Very original to say the least.
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  • From ANON - L.S on July 04, 2006
    I like it. It was a bit funny;) Who is the vampire Sirius knows? hurry up with more
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  • From ANON - christie on July 02, 2006
    I love the story so far.. it's always good when harry goes bad but you still get to like severus, sirius, the malfoys, and remus (did you notice my subtle hint?) can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Katie on June 25, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING AND SOON! THIS STORY IS GREAT, BUT PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU, ADD MORE TO IT! I AND THE REST OF YOUR READERS WOULD REALLY LOVE IT! IF YOU WOULD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE I AM ABOUT TO GO INSANE FROM ALL OF THE SUSPENSE, AND DON
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2006
    First of all, there is no background info at all. I am left with questions such as "What made Harry go dark?", and "How did Harry and Tom's relationship start?". Not just that, but the plot development is so slow that I am wondering if the story even has a point. Almost all the characters are out of character with little to no reason as to why. I do not wish you to take this the wrong way. I believe you have potential, but in order for you to reach that potential you need to spend more time clueing the readers in to what is happening in the story and why these things are happening. Forgive me if my comments seem insulting, for they are not meant to be so.

    Sincerely,
    myself
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  • From ANON - Nubds on June 11, 2006
    omg, luv it, cannot wait for more action
    lol

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  • From In2Deep on May 31, 2006
    LoL... thats so funny! I can introduce you ... as if hes some normal guy that he goes to school with and not the dark lord! lol... any who i love it and hope that you up-dates soon!
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  • From ANON - Lothirielwen on May 01, 2006
    More please!
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  • From ANON - BZLF on May 01, 2006
    Er.. Little to no backstory on why or how Harry and Voldemort/Tom are together. Tom seems out of character, and I'd say Harry was, if not for the fact you were trying to make him evil.
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  • From ANON - sando on April 20, 2006
    I like this story. It is excellent. I love to read Dark Harry stories. I am looking forward to the rest of the chapters to come.
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  • From ANON - volume on April 13, 2006
    I would like to read more. Soon. If at all possible.
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