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By : Darknessmaster
  • From Isabell3 on November 06, 2016

    Please update :-)  


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  • From ANON - RELionhart on February 05, 2014
    Uhm, yeah. This story honestly has potential, but isn't living up to it. Also, were you aware that you put the same story out twice? The least you could have done was to put something different in the summary. Anyway, as I said, this could have been an interesting story but it flows too fast and there isn't enough description. I mean, you go from him being in the train to him being at the Dursleys to him being at the Dark Lord's lair and being annoyed by Neville (Whom you don't explain what he's doing there or how) and that randomly Draco and Neville are Harry's only friends and are together. I think this story would be so much better if you actually took the time to flesh it out some. Then it would be worth having the same story up twice. Fix these things, and I'll happily re-read the story. Thank you for reading this, even though it kind of acts like a flame.
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  • From happyreading on July 01, 2009
    this is a good story wish you would complete it thanks for the start
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 14, 2007
    I LOVE THE STORY ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATED SOON?
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  • From slashslut on February 19, 2007
    greatness! another chapter would make it even better *hint, hint, nudge, nudge;)* email me when you update: pwfan626@aol.com
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 27, 2006
    love this...Please, Please, PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!!!

    Love To All,
    Jessica

    "Like I always say, there's no "I" in team...there's a "me" though, if you jumble it up."
    --Dr. Gregory House
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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on December 02, 2006
    Continue updating because I want to continue reading this awesome story so, please update!
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  • From ANON - Ana on November 24, 2006
    Your chapters are too short. Otherwise its a good story.
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  • From ANON - Mistress Vamp on September 04, 2006
    Oh I love intrigue. Please update again when you can!! ::MV::
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  • From ANON - Elda on August 31, 2006
    *lol* Lovely and why must you leave off such a cliche??????
    Come on please update soon!!! I love your story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mino on August 30, 2006
    yay, you updated. The chapter was really good, I liked the way you described harry's feelings.
    so here's a cookie *gives cookie*
    -Mino ((aka Minoko))
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  • From ANON - Mistress Vamp on August 12, 2006
    I'm enjoying this. I hope you update again soon. I look forward to more. ::MV::
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 28, 2006
    im really liking this story and sssssssooooooooocant wait for more...so ill be waitin...have fun writin
    -Nita
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  • From ANON - Rectorlamia on July 05, 2006
    Is there an update in the near future O.o? Because that would be realllly nice. *starts babbling* I really really liked it, why do we authors seem to put Harry and voldie into the smart asses. I swear we do they're always teasing each other or threatening each other with empty threats. Great chapters that I didn't review. I was to caught up in the story to review. So please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Rectorlamia on July 05, 2006
    Evil is what I do. Can I use that XD? great chapters. I found it hilarious poor Lucius so naive.
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