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By : wretchedscar
  • From ANON - Breeze on December 14, 2006
    No! NO! No block now! Your fic is woderful! Your style of writing is refreshing; mostly humorous but overly so, the beginning, franky, kept me on my toes and I was glad it turned out all right. You managed to make Harry a victim but he's still able to keep his resistance up (for an admirably long time). And Draco's characterization was just masterful! You kept him so human the reader could forgive him pretty much straight away (and concerning what he did it might not have been that easy). He screws up (a couple of times) but makes up for it. You pulled it off - you truly did. Even D's bravery fits perfectly with his 'man on a mission' attitude and he just comes across as sex crazed (but crazy about Harry so it's OK :) possessive (but aparently also protective) guy, so we can totally root for him.

    Harry, despite of keeping his head and fighting like he should, is so sweet and perfectly innocent.
    The the way you have written him is delicious - simply disarming :) Blaise and Pansy are likewise PERFECT in their roles and I like Hermione too, the talk she had with Draco outside the Tower entrance was well executed :) Draco is just so.. REAL, not that he's perfectly INC (which is good since his kind of wimp could hardly pull any of this off ;) but he's so human like I already mentioned.. and H pulls my heart strings so what else does one need? I'm sure I forgot something.. (but if you're nice and update soon I could remeber that in a second review ;)

    Really, wonderful piece of work - entertaining and believable. I'll look forward to seeing more jealous action on D's part (Nott is going to want to test-drive our sweet Harrykins, I just know it, can't have that :) And I smell more trouble in the paradise in a form of a unamused father :) can't wait :p
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  • From ANON - Rawben on June 11, 2006
    oh! great chapter!! i like harry on top. ;)
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  • From ANON - Cassie on May 27, 2006
    WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! Your story is Amazing! I love it! You write very steamy sex scenes. You've got great plot what with Draco having to find a way to win Harry and have him all to himself and keep him save from his Father and Voldemort and Nott. I think you did a great job on their first date, and I wonder how Snape will react? I hope to read more soon! ^__-
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  • From ANON - dannigurl on May 26, 2006
    This a great story! I love the interaction between Draco and Harry. I hope you get over your writer's block and update soon!
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  • From ANON - nobody knows on May 26, 2006
    *whimpers* where's the rest of it?? i...i...need more!! gawds i'm nearly addicted to this...no wait, scratch that, i AM addicted to this!!! *sigh* it was lovely...really..u actually managed to make me squeal and laugh out loud...i can say that you're incredibly talented and if you don't finish this i might just cry, aside from other withdrawal symptoms...the flow of the story wasn't rushed and not damn freakin slow(i hate it when people do that) so i really enjoyed it...aaaaaaaaaaaaah the joys of funny draco/harry!!! ah well...watever...hope your writer's block goes away REAL REAL quick n that you update soon...=D
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  • From ANON - Ari on May 25, 2006
    I Love Love Love it with a capital L....
    I can't wait to see you post more!!!! :dance:
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  • From ANON - Merlin1003 on May 13, 2006

    THIS STORY ROCKS!!!

    PLEASE UPDATE!!

    I WANT TO READ MORE OF IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Lucky13 on May 13, 2006

    Beautiful, just beautiful! It's passionate and full of drama between Draco and Harry. And the characters hasn't change one bit.

    Please you HAVE to add another thrilling chapter, you just have to!!

    Don't leave us like this!
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  • From ANON - DeadThings on May 13, 2006

    This story is the best I've read so far! There was some shocking parts and a little bit of a twist, it was really cool.

    I love Draco and how he tries to get Harry, even though Harry refuses.

    I really want to read what happens next and what will happen to them in the end. Cause this is actually my favorite story here.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on May 10, 2006
    daaamn. great chapter!! i love this pairing!! you're doing a great job w/ it too! i hope you plan on continuing!!!
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  • From ANON - Bronwyn on May 10, 2006
    I really like the plot and the story is over all well written. However, while reading I encountered many typos and missing words. I would encourage you to re-read your own work and to get a beta reader. It's hard to enjoy a story if words are missing or spelled wrong/unrecognizable. Other than that I think you have a good thing going and I hope you continue it.
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  • From ANON - avihenda on May 06, 2006
    GREAT fic! I loved it! hope you write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on April 27, 2006
    WOWOWOWOWOOOW!!!! I love this story alot! I think Draco's obsession with Harry is just the best! I hope you update it very soon cause I'm addicted! I hope you write many more stories as well!
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  • From ANON - Banner on April 23, 2006
    So I woke up at 5:00 a.m., having the thought of the *perfect* comeback for Harry:
    In a loud clear voice (designed to get the attention of everyone in the immediate area) say, "Malfoy, stop hitting on me. I've told you 'no' the last four times you've tried to proposition me. It's over, sweetheart. Please try to accept it."
    WHY do I never think of these things til long after the conversation?
    * walks off, muttering to myself, "I never think of these in time" *
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  • From ANON - Banner on April 21, 2006
    Malfoy better learn some manners (and respect) or Harry will really hurt him. Harry is training as a Battle Wizard. The only reason he hasn't reacted as viciously as he can is that Draco has him off-balance. But oh, boy! When Harry gets pushed too far, Draco is going to get a helluva surprise.
    I can't wait.
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