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Reviews for Hidden Secrets, Secret Destinies

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  • From ANON - Valentina Juwels on August 21, 2006
    your story is sooo cool, i love the story line... it MAD!!! neways i'm jus stopping by to offer a piece of advice concerning the dialogue in ur DM & HSSD - the way i see it, when u write a dialogue in a story, don't make it seem as if u're writing what some else is saying, u noe try to put urself in the roles of ur characters and how u wud respond but still keeping the flavour of ur characters... make ur dialogues come together that is all i'm saying... neways ciao darling keep doing ya thang!
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  • From ANON - Valentina Juwels on August 21, 2006
    your story is sooo cool, i love the story line... it MAD!!! neways i'm jus stopping by to offer a piece of advice concerning the dialogue in ur DM & HSSD - the way i see it, when u write a dialogue in a story, don't make it seem as if u're writing what some else is saying, u noe try to put urself in the roles of ur characters and how u wud respond but still keeping the flavour of ur characters... make ur dialogues come together that is all i'm saying... neways ciao darling keep doing ya thang!
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  • From ANON - sweettee on May 15, 2006
    please up date soon I can't wait to see what Harry and Draco's reaction is going to be when they find out that they are mate's. and Harmione's when Snape is her's I think that he is going to be her mate. can you please let me know when you up date.
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  • From ANON - Dezra on May 07, 2006
    Great story so far, I can't wait until you write the next chapter.
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  • From Severine on May 07, 2006
    awsome, this story just keeps getting better!!!
    please more soon
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  • From ANON - momoko on May 07, 2006
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Cassie on May 07, 2006
    I love the new chapter! If only we could actually see the look on Snape's face! I know I would be dying from laughter! I wonder how Ron feels about all this! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Trecklar on May 06, 2006
    My name is Ron. Ron Weasley. Can I kill Harry in the next chapter? It would make my day to kill the idiot and inherit all his money. Not to mention the fame for being the one that was strong enough to kill off the boy who lived to many times.
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  • From Severine on May 06, 2006
    wow, billiant start. vey promsing
    can't wait to read more
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2006
    Wow! That was awesome, I do hope that you plan on continuing this...and soon. :) Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - moony2 on April 24, 2006
    I love the 2nd chapter of this story but I wish you would update Finding Love. When will Draco discover that he's Harry's mate & that Harry's a vampire? Who is Hermoine's mate? When will Ron get his head out of his ass? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - momoko on April 24, 2006
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - Amessis on April 23, 2006
    I love this! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on April 23, 2006
    I love this! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on April 19, 2006
    Oooh! Very creative, very interesting. I'm very much looking forward to what is to come! I like that harry's a vampire, that's kinda hot :D and I like that Harry and Draco aren't snogging in the first chapter, i HATE stories like that! Plus, hermione's in it! I can tell this is gonna be very good, please update soon!
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