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Reviews for Dangerous Manipulation

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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on December 15, 2006
    OOOOOO! Please update before I go crazy waiting and bash my head into the computer screen.
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  • From ANON - Redrain on December 13, 2006
    I liked your story so far Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ari on October 15, 2006
    Keep it up, loved it so far.
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  • From ANON - lisa on September 23, 2006
    good story
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  • From ANON - SANDO on September 21, 2006
    Good story. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on September 19, 2006
    **pouts** But I like the fluffy Snape! I hope he doesn't learn to fight the urge to much, at least! Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Echo on September 18, 2006
    Great fic and chapter. Can't wait to see what Harry and crew has in plan for Dumbledore and Voldemort (just notice how similar those names seem) Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - AislinnNicole on September 18, 2006
    I really enjoyed reading everything you've written so far. I adore forced bonding and Mpreg in Snarry fics, and you've made them both work wonderfully!!! I'd love to read more of this fic. I like the idea that the bond makes them love and care for each other; although, I'd like to know more about Snape's plan after he and Harry had bonded. You mentioned his plan in the first chapter, so I'm looking forward to seeing if anything comes of that or if the feelings from the bond ruined it.

    Thanks for the chapters so far and I hope you plan to continue it!!
    ~Aislinn
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  • From ANON - havoc on August 18, 2006
    ILL KILL THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great story but ILL KILL THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Katherine on July 27, 2006
    Hey! Is there anyway that I could find out when this is updated? Because I would really like to continue reading/reviewing this! It's an excelent story, well written! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tris on July 01, 2006
    Please Please Please keep writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - Simal on June 18, 2006
    I really like your story. I would suggest that you don't put the bonding ceremony in the story. The details are most likely not going to impact the rest of the story. I would also like to suggest that you don't keep Harry Potter as the underdog for very long. Unless you want to turn this into a BDSM or a slave fic - which I hope you don't I like the plot the way its been so far. Anywho, keep it up and I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Darshu on June 04, 2006
    I think I might actually enjoy your story. :) I'm not usually into lots of angst (since I'm easily depressed), but I do like Powerful/Manipulative!Harry. And since I also like Snape/Harry, this is combining two of my favorite dishes into one. ::grins::

    The only critique I have is to maybe get a beta reader, or to re-read each chapter with a red pen to check for possible mistakes. I found a few instances of misspelling (Which I can't usually do myself), grammatical errors, and unclosed paranthesis. The one that really stuck in my mind (since I just finished reading that section), was how you had Harry call Severus "Sevvie", but then you spelled it "Sevie" when Severus was reacting to it.

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I also can't wait to see the school's reaction when Harry & co. get resorted.

    As to your question; Unless there is a detail in the bonding that will be important later, I would not include the actual bonding. Maybe some of the "guests" and Severus and Harry's reactions, both before and afterwards.
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  • From ANON - Jammie on June 02, 2006
    This is good.
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on May 30, 2006
    Argh!! Update already!! Pleassseeee! Here, have brownies--update soon now???
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