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Reviews for Lonely Summer(repost)

By : strngluv
  • From ANON - big_show2000us on July 19, 2006
    Ive seen several people knocking this story, but from the things ive seen so far I really like it. I hope that you decide to continue this story because I really want to know how things turn out with Hestia and if Harry gets to go home for a nice christmas present.
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  • From ANON - reviewer on May 30, 2006
    i don't know if you want to or not, but why not go for a harry/petunia/hestia&tonks thing.
    makes for good reading and there isn't much fics with this kinda harem.

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  • From ANON - dave on May 17, 2006
    I just wanted to say the story is great and that i hope that you'll update it soon!!!!
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  • From MyrddinEmrys on April 18, 2006
    I think that you should have Susan Bones or Hannah Abbot as the pureblood, meh who am I to talk though. It'd be good to see them used in a new light, and I hope that you update soon!

    Myrddin
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  • From MyrddinEmrys on April 18, 2006
    This is a great chapter. I liked the story the first time around, and this time I can certainly see it will be just as good :P At least I hope it will :)

    Myrddin
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  • From ANON - DemonAura on April 18, 2006
    if ur goin to have harry "messing" about with a lot of girls out of hogwarts. make sure one is ginny cause with all the following after him i think she deserves a good fuck for her efforts
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  • From ANON - DemonAura on April 18, 2006
    if ur goin to have harry "messing" about with a lot of girls out of hogwarts. make sure one is ginny cause with all the following after him i think she deserves a good fuck
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  • From ANON - cj_cold on April 17, 2006
    Nice story.

    A little disappointed that you didn't cover more of Harry's summer(as the title stated) with Petunia. Wondering how she came to view him and what she might have come up with to make up for the years for neglectful treatment. Wondering if she came up with a good birthday present for him.

    Liked the introduction of Hestia and Tonks(I am a big Tonks fan). Loved Harry's responce to Tonks firting, not completely smooth yet as he doesn't have much experience but confident and learning.

    I like your idea of using Hestia as his wife, you could make her a pureblood since her past is never discussed in canon. I would tend to think that it would be best if she was from a family like the Weasleys, Old but not very wealthy or anything. I can see them bonding over this last week before school starts and Harry maybe seeing an opportunity asks permission to owl her from school. And they start corresponding and learn more about each other maybe Harry explains the situation and proposes to her during a hogsmeade weekend(while they are in bed at the Three Broom Sticks of course).

    Hestia is also better because she is old enough to make marriage relatively soon a good idea. I just don't see any of the girls at school marrying Harry before graduation without beign gold or fame diggers that Harry probably wouldn't want to be married to. The fact she is out of school also means she can stay with Petunia almost full time for protection and help out with the baby.

    Think it would be nice to involve Tonks as well(both sexually and otherwise). While not a pureblood(she's a halfblood, mother pure, father muggleborn) she may have been raised with enough traditions to accept the situation and her abilities would be very useful in providing the cover story for Petunia. She could morph into the young lady that harry knocked up and be seen around privet Drive with Petunia. Petunia could have Hestia and Tonks use simple glamours to hide her own pregnancy. With so many witnesses the story will have much more protection. Hell if Tonks is brought in before Harry goes back to school maybe he could even get some muggle style pictures of him and mystery girl(Tonks) to show his friends his summer romance. The trick with lying is to make it as big as possible, the greater the lie the more people will believe it because its to much to fake. Someone like Dumbledore would look question Harry's friends and investigate the neighborhood and with the story being basically the same in multiple places would accept it.

    My favorite scenario that comes to mind has Hestia and Tonks already involved in a relationship, both are Bi, and Hestia is being pressured by her family to wed and provide an Heir. But she doesn't want to completely leave Tonks, so she has to find someone who her family will accept, she likes, Tonks likes, and would accept Tonks as a Mistress without seeing her as a living sex toy for her metamorph abilities. Not exactly easy.
    But that's Unlikely to be what you go with.

    A few nitpicks and questions.
    1. What does Hestia look like, you included no discription of her character. The only thing I remember from the books is that she was dark haired and eyed and approximately Tonks age. So how old is she. Need more info on her.
    2. How much contact has Harry had with his friends this summer, he didn't seem that anxious to see them. How much will he tell them.
    3. Like the way you show Harry as focused on his more immediate problems, he has shown no interest in the Order's activities. I'm guessing its because he has more personal problems to handle with baby. So he is studying as much as he can for that but his first concern is his new 'family'
    4. Has Petunia changed her name back to Evans. Will the baby be Evans or Potter, I doubt Harry would want it to be Dursley. It would probaby be easiest to go with Evans as legal name.
    5. What did Hestia originally come to 'talk' with Harry about, especially wearing her nightclothes???
    6. Wonder if Harry will admit he had been thinking about Hestia and Tonks while jacking off?

    Update soon. I hope that now that aff.net is mostly fixed that you will update more frequently.

    More soon please.
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