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Reviews for Apprentice

By : magicalheather999
  • From ANON - SL on July 15, 2013
    I found this to be an excellent story! I wish there were some elaboration about Hermione getting a taste of dark arts. I feel it'll challenge her, and also brings the two closer together.

    Thank you.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 11, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Linda on August 14, 2006
    This was an amazing story, though I thought the ending came on to fast. The story was so well written and the relationship between Hermione and Severus was truly beautiful. Yes I too shed a few tears while reading Chapter 5.

    I do believe that a truly gifted author allows the reader to experience feelings the characters themselves feel.

    I do hope you will do the sequel. Please try and let me know if you do as I'd really like to see where this will take them.

    Many thanks for a great piece.

    Linda
    Passionate4Snape
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on May 23, 2006
    This certainly has great potential for an excellent story. There are a few spelling errors but hey this is your first fic and we all make mistakes yeah? You have a good writing style and I like your dialogue too, it flows and makes for easy reading. Maybe you could have spent a little more time on developing the relationship between your 2 main characters but I still love what I've read! All I need now is for MORE!!!!! LOL and Blessings Amethystique xx ; )x
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  • From ANON - Raven on May 22, 2006
    write more please. I really like this story.
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  • From ANON - Starbridge on April 28, 2006
    I like it so far. Can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 27, 2006
    Good start to this story. I hope Severus and Remus are friendly enough now so they don't make Hermione's visit more difficult. More story please.
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  • From ANON - newfig on April 26, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this.
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  • From ANON - glowing_haven on April 21, 2006
    You said this is your first story???????? Could've fooled me...no seriously I think it's a very good start and would love to see where you're taking it. So there's no need for insecurities.
    If you still search for a beta you can mail me...I would love to try it...and if you don't then just some advice...don't worry nothing bad :-)
    You should just watch out for some of your sentences getting too long...mostly it's great written but sometimes the sentences are so long that it's hard to remember the beginning. Second and last from me...re-read your chapters very carefully...it would be best to re-read them after a break of uh maybe an hour or so...you see minor faults (mostly there because of fast typing) better because you don't read what you think that you wrote down, but what you really wrote...did that make sense to you??????
    Well I'm looking forward to your next (and hopefully soon) update.
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  • From ANON - skydancer on April 20, 2006
    hey people...96 hits and two revievs, c'mon.....help boost the egos here.
    nicely done, lots of room to play with and I promise to wait paitiently ( but not for long...) for chapter two

    sky
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on April 19, 2006
    Good start, you have definately hooked me in, Lol. There is a lot of potential for all sorts of things to happen. Can't wait for the next update to see what you have planned for our favourite duo, lol. Toodles.
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