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Reviews for The Heir of Hogwarts and The Snarky Potion Master

By : smallyuy
  • From dominique1 on May 17, 2008
    so cute this story is coming along nicely i hope for updated soon
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  • From Makovaso on March 23, 2007
    Please update!!!
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  • From ANON - yocum1219 on January 07, 2007
    more!!!!!!!!!!!!! let me know when you update please!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - meg on January 04, 2007
    This is a great story, I love it!! Please continue to write more, I can't wait to see what happens after chapter 3, with the bonding ceremony and Harry and Sev meeting for the first time in three years!! Aahh, I'm soooo excited, please update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - Celticslash on January 04, 2007
    Awwwwwww this is awesome i want the pen friends to final get to meet each other!!
    Fantastic story keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Amarilis on January 04, 2007
    Nice story. I really want to see how Harry and Severus relationship develops. Please please please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Washu on January 04, 2007
    I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Ron's pregnant right? I hope so.^^
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  • From ANON - Vittani on January 03, 2007
    Aaaww blody hell Severus is just as oblivious as Harry. You have got to update this, this is brilliant. Poor Roniekins.
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  • From ANON - Crimson Vipera on January 03, 2007
    A really fine story, but You have a serious problem with tenses! I'm really sorry to say it this way, but have You ever HEARD of past tense? Past perfect, for example? I sugest a beta. You really need it. Even people whose mother language is english have them. Why post something that has good content but is unreadable becouse of spelling and grammar? Still, the story is quite good. You should continue.
    Sincerely,
    CV
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  • From ANON - ranni on January 03, 2007
    Awesome fic! Can't wait to see the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 02, 2007
    I like this story even if Sev's a bit OOC but then again he and Harry are friends here now. I cant wait to see what Hermione, Draco and the Weasley family are going to do to get Harry and SEverus together. Update as soon as you can
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  • From ANON - Miki on January 02, 2007
    It is a good story so far. You need to get a beta or read it over before you post your story though. You have some mistakes that should not be there. Such as when Albus is telling Harry to have a "Save" trip insted of a "safe" trip. In my own writing I do the same thing so when I catch it in others writings I like to point it out. Because I like it when other point out my little mistakes too. I will keep reading your story. Best of luck to you in writing this fan fic.

    Miki
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 02, 2007
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - LadyNiteRaven on January 02, 2007
    Excellent. More Please.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on November 15, 2006
    WOW!!!!!! Please update soon. WOW!!!!
    K

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