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By : CrimsonRegret
  • From xDAISUKIx on October 02, 2012
    So good, love the idea of Harry being inside Lucius.

    If you ever have time, please continue.

    PLEASE!!!!
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  • From KitsuneThief on December 25, 2010
    ohhh, great story!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I love your interpretation of the characters!! They're so awesome. And I hope you've had an uber christmas!
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  • From QueenB on November 15, 2010
    Ch. 8 A fair chapter, although the smoking is still a pain. Smoking in bed is incredibly dangerous! You'd think Snape would point that out at least.
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  • From alientheet on November 12, 2010
    Interesting... please continue. I like how you have incorperated the future Snape to remember the stuff that had happened when Harry was Lucius.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 11, 2010
    Now here is something I truly have not read before.
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  • From QueenB on June 30, 2010
    Ch. 7 I will accept (grudgingly) your Harry's addiction to fags and drink. As for your other comments about my critique: proper spelling, punctuation and grammar ARE important. Excuses such as improper or non-existent education are unacceptable. Rotten examples of any of these things slow down reading, break the flow of a story and are just depressing. Anything worth doing is worth doing well. Otherwise, why bother? (You spell "surreptiously" correctly but replace "head" with "he'd"?!? That's a bizarre mistake even for a lousy speller. Oy.)

    As for thinking you wrote that Severus is older than Lucius, I apologize. I mis-understood a piece of dialogue in chapter 3. I thought you were referring to Lucius when you actually meant Harry.

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  • From dominique1 on June 29, 2010
    so far am hook i do hope that harry try's to be nice 'er to sev i don't know i just want harry and sev together
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  • From dominique1 on June 29, 2010
    so far i like it just hope that if i get hook you will finish the story because alot of wirter's don't so let see if i like this journey
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  • From CruelHero on June 26, 2010
    xD Here and waiting for an update. Just wanted to let you know. ^.^
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  • From countesszero on June 23, 2010
    lovely turn on the time turner fic in giving harry lucius' body. there is no need to be overly strict with logic or grammar methinks (but maybe a beta is a good idea? it's also nice to have someone testread stuff and develop plot ideas with?) :D

    anway i'm here for the sex hee! and the sex is delicious in your fic! the more the better.

    did you state het and lm/nm (or actually hp/nm) in your warnings? i don't mind AT ALL :D - but then i don't mind firenze/squid either.

    there are some readers who cannot bear to read about female genitals in action - so maybe they'd need a fair warning.

    your smoking, drinking harry isn't that bad either. (although i do agree with queen b. - it's not really jkr's harry - but then i like your harry as well!)

    i hope you continue with this fun story - a young snape in distress is always great to read and you write him very beautifully!


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  • From QueenB on June 22, 2010
    Ch. 5 Your plotline is original; I have to admit. Having Harry thrown back in time and in another person
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  • From Konatachi on May 09, 2009
    Love the story
    hope your going to finish it
    can't wait to see what happens next
    good Luck XD
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  • From LadyVixen1908 on February 25, 2009
    This is brilliant, I LOVE IT, you are so talented - give me more more more! Please????????
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  • From Veracityrules on January 09, 2009
    This fics is absolutely sodding awesome. Me want more and more and more and more and m........
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on November 15, 2006
    update soon please. K.
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