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Reviews for A Proper Valentines' Day

By : RyuaAlba
  • From hphglover on September 04, 2007
    Wow, that was so hot! Especially when you read all the chapters at once. Damn if I wasn't crossing my legs hard! Excellent job and I hope to see more soon. I like Ryua a lot! And Hermione's shyness is sweet. More, please!!
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  • From ANON - chikita_banana on September 03, 2007
    I loved your story. It was very well written and described, especially the way you describe the scene(s) that the readers can envision them very clearly. I've never read threesome fics before, that's why the last chapter made me a bit confused. It wasn't your fault, though. I enjoyed reading the library scene, and then Madam Pince stood there all of a sudden. Gees, the thing happened to me and my partner, too, when we did the same in public. lol

    Please, write more femmeslash fics, it's inspiring. ^_^
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  • From ANON - katrin4p on September 02, 2007
    OKAY, here I am! So... I didn't really like the idea of Ginny : I mean it's just that... Will they keep going as a threesome or will Ginny just...go away with her own life and everything? Because... Argh, I kind of like Luna now...even Pansy. But Ginny just doesn't work for me -_-' Don't ask me why, she just doesn't.

    Anyway I thought it was a nice chapter nonetheless, Ginny just irked me. >.> But oh well... Can't wait for the next one! ;)

    (When I saw that this was updated I was like... What? No way! This is REALLY updated? But then I saw there really WAS another chapter and I started squealing (and my parents didn't understand why (nor do they have to!)))
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  • From kingbooze on September 01, 2007
    thanks for the update LOVE the description, I await more with glee.
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  • From ANON - Ashley Snape on August 20, 2007
    I love this Story Ryua its a good read, Can;t wait to see he pops into the bathroom, it'll be good fun! Can't wait for the next Chapter!
    Ashley Snape
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  • From ANON - Heirii-chan on April 07, 2007
    yay femslash and bondage this has got to be one of my favorite storys!!!
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  • From ANON - woo on March 29, 2007
    woot
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  • From ANON - bloob on March 23, 2007
    Wow... Amazing story. I'm glad this isn't a one shot, you really can dive deeper into the relationship with more then just one chapter. Great fic, I hope to see more and a little more darker 'things' added to the mix. ^^
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  • From on March 03, 2007
    I found this fic some days ago and really, I'm completely in love with it. I know it's PWP but it can be funny and erotic at the same time. Oh, and in your AN you said that OC's weren't always accepted that well. I honestly prefer Hermione with an OFC than with Ginny or Luna or Pansy, or any other female for that matter. Dunno, just think they'd look really weird.

    Well, I hope you update soon! Oh and really, I'm looking forward to see who entered the bathroom. I thought maybe it was Harry or Ron...but then again it could be some stupid Slytherin...or one of the teachers...Gods, the possibilities! It's impossible to guess!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2007
    Mk, so I finally made an account. Please, for the love of god, update woman!
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  • From ANON - Sinner_Amongst_Saints on February 13, 2007
    I must admit that I actually like the story. Even though you really didn't have a plan for it at the beginging, I loved where it has ended up so far. I would like to see much more. That and I want to know who caught them! It's going to drive me nuts for a long time.
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  • From pardonme311 on February 12, 2007
    I just finished reading the latest chapter of A Proper Valentine's Day, and I have to say I LOVE it. SO PLEASE update soon.

    Waiting Patiently For The Next Update!
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  • From ANON - Khaleda on February 12, 2007
    Hey...*points to self* curious about the scars, and who opened the door. And just curious as to where this relationship is going. Any chance for an update?
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  • From ANON - Blaike Dhei on February 11, 2007
    Oh ho ho! Hot. =D Ooooh, I wonder who's at the door? Could it be Pansy? Or Draco? Or Ron? O_O Or hell, maybe a teacher? Now THAT would scream awkward. I'm LOVING the story! Update soon!
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  • From xXxSierraxXx on February 02, 2007
    I actually enjoyed this, hurry up with the next chapter. I'm dying to see who enters the room.
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