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Reviews for A Proper Valentines' Day

By : RyuaAlba
  • From ANON - setius on January 26, 2007
    Are you the godess of love or endless pleasures? that was the greatest story ever!
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  • From ANON - King_Booze on January 25, 2007
    Hey nice update, I love a bit of Bondage so YAY! Keep writing Please!

    -Booze
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  • From ANON - Cod on January 12, 2007
    Been reading this story for quite a while :) It's the best femmeslash fic I've ever read, let alone one with Hermione in it. ^_^ Usually I don't like fics with OCs, but this was just incredible. Keep it up, you're an awesome writer, though I can't think of anything to request right now. xP
    Cod

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  • From ANON - agussstina.. on January 11, 2007
    bloody hell!
    OMG that was just wonderful...
    but please, please, please...don't let me here, without knowing what's about to happen, wicked woman!
    LoL
    got to read more, please update!
    Ryua is just the kind of character I would think Hermione would fall in love with. She is so a Sly girl, but at the same time she's so vulnerable.
    Loved it. Really did.
    the best femmalash I've ever read

    good God, woman! you do know how to make me shake!

    LoL

    agussstina..
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  • From ANON - Elle H. M. on January 10, 2007
    Am I the only one wanting a bath now? Ok, nevermind, it was great, as usual and now I'm trying to work out who came into the bathroom...was it Ron? Or Draco? Or a teacher even? Oh god, it wasn't Snape was it? Because that would be very very bad...Ok, enough rambling and random guessing. I can't wait to see if you update again. I hope you do.
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  • From ANON - Khaleda on January 10, 2007
    Mmm...That was nice. And that is exactly the proper way to wear a tie. In fact, all girls should wear them...and yes, these scars. They're too perfect to be an accident, unless she was wearing something that burned her...so family ritual perhaps? *points to self* Curious. Single. Likes updates.

    ~Khaleda
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on December 29, 2006
    Oh, this is wonderfull. It is so hard to find good femslash. And finally a fic were Hermione is with someone else than Ginny! I cant`t tell you how happy I am. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Khaleda on December 27, 2006
    Sooooo...you gonna update any time soon? Because I like where this is going. I like how forward and primal Ryua is...and curious as to the origins of those scars. Maybe see some of this bondage Ryua has a thing for...hm?
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  • From ANON - Sam on December 15, 2006
    PLEASE update soon.... =)
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  • From ANON - Renata G. on December 11, 2006
    Pretty nice story you have there ;)
    I have to especially comment your range of vocabulary, your grammar and the description of some scenes, which were excellent (very few mistakes).
    But (everything has a but, doesn't it?), I was kinda... let's say, amused by the way the two girls got together. A little too out of the blue, wasn't it? I don't know if you you're dealing with a world that prejudice doesn't exist or anything similar situation, but Hermione, in the book, doesn't have any lesbian relationship or thoughts (though I think she should, because Ron is... uhh... disgusting)
    And Ron and Harry, her best friends appeared in the story only once, which is weird. In the 6th year, they kept following her around, why wouldn't they do the same in the 7th?
    I hope you do not take this as a flame. It is not. I'm also an author and for me, reviews like this are really useful. Hope you agree
    Best Wishes, Renata
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  • From ANON - lang on December 05, 2006
    i like swords!
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  • From ANON - Loki on December 04, 2006
    Best F/F HP fics I've seen so far. Your writing is absolutely marvelous. I hope you'll write another Yuri HP fics. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Blaike Dhei on November 29, 2006
    Good sex = Good story, as far as I'm concerned. One thing I notice though, is that only one partner get's to achieve orgasm when they have sex, and, perhaps it's just me, but my girlfriend would never hear the END of it if we were fucking and she came and rolled over and said goodnight. There would be hell to pay, I assure you.

    Requests?! I want to see some bondage, maybe some more kink, like paddles and whatnot. (If you need a paddle idea, my lover and I have a fabulous one, that has studs that smack the words "slut" into the skin. The humiliation factor makes it sexier, and makes me such a ho.) Also, perhaps some clit on cilt grinding sexiness, and not just hands and mouth? Anyways, keep going! =D
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  • From ANON - labelle on November 25, 2006
    Oh my god, this is so ... beautifully written! And so real. Tasteful smut is an oxymoron no longer. Thank you SO much for this gift ... it's definitely going on my favorites ... and as soon as I regain my ability to think, I'm requesting a scene from you! *pant* Good lord.
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  • From ANON - sean moses on November 20, 2006
    dude you gotta keep writing this one is very hot and sexy....just like me (no im not gay just informing the good people of this webcite) so yea u gotta keep writing plz
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