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Reviews for Under The Midnight Sky

By : foxieprincess
  • From ANON - Angel Knight on October 21, 2007
    I'm alittle confused. In 1 of the earlier chapters, while Harry was at hogwarts for the summer, you said he overheard dumbledore talking about how he planed the whole war and that he started with Tom Riddle. So why is he all "Oh dumbledore can help" and "it was those bloody deatheaters" (I'm generizeing how I see some of what was writen not quoteing), and hateing tom. With everything you show or write or whatever from the start of the story to start of school you would think harry would be like "Someone has a spell and is trying to kill off your clan. Has anyone beenable to check out dumbledore cause I bet it's him." Also during the summer he read that book and had those dreams so when he felt the pull and the jelousy you think his first question to the chick would either be "are you one of those anchient vampires(or what ever their name is)?" or "Am I your mate, cause I have been haveing these dreams and I fell like I'm being pulled towards you?" or something. Other then those 2 things I like the story. It just seems like the summer part and the school part are from 2 different stories or like 2 different versions of the same story got mixed up. I really apriciate you writeing though and just wasted to point that out to you. As you maybe able to tell by this review I'm not to good with writeing but I love to read fanfiction so thank you.
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  • From mast44yh on July 24, 2007
    nice story, update soon!
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  • From ecorate on April 04, 2007
    hey think i can get the next chapters in advance my e-mail is in my profio
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  • From ecorate on March 31, 2007
    great work keep it up and update soon
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