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Reviews for Tainted White

By : nera
  • From ANON - shalamonde16 aka lala on December 02, 2006
    To maja and all of her reader's I'd like to apologize for my slipups with this chappie...as exhausted as I was while beta'ing it, I missed a couple of things.For example the vine-whine mistake.. please understand it was not my fault not maja's... and I hope you all will be able to enjoy this chappie nonetheless. Thank you.

    lala
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  • From ANON - Magzie on December 02, 2006
    Zara, You are a truely amazing writer, I love this story, and I CANNOT wait to see where ti goes. Will Harry Rescue her, will she choose to stay with Malfoy, what hot date, I love this so much, please update again soon, I understand that it takes time, but I still come and check in! Keep up the great work!

    Magzie
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  • From RiddikulusSugarQuill on December 02, 2006
    Ok.. this was a beautiful, sentimental, dark chapter. I loved it! But I just have one suggestion- read it over to fix some mistakes. There were just a couple of typos like "vine" in there. Other than that this chapter was great! Please don't let me wait as long as the last time for an update!
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  • From ANON - saya on December 02, 2006
    the story's really good !!!!!!!!
    you never stop surprising me...
    I can't wait till the next chap

    thank you xD !!
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  • From ANON - Alissia on November 24, 2006
    I just wanted to let you know, I never review, but reading this, I couldnt help but doing so. You're writing is sensational, hell, even your puncuation is perfect, lol. It just struck me because there are some stories you read and they are less than well written, but yours are wonderful. Absolutely beautiful in the detail, the battle of emotions in both of them. Well, anyway, your writing is quite professional, and I enjoyed your story very much.

    Keep on writing!!

    Alissia
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  • From ANON - shalamonde aka lala on November 13, 2006
    no matter how many times i read this fic, it always manages to put a smile on my face. keep up the good work maja... we're routing for u! [(:]
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  • From ANON - luuu on November 13, 2006
    I SIMPLY LOVE IT.... L.O.V.E IT!! well written, perfect story plot...i found it so..deep... soul brreaking...the angst the pain the love, so real.... the end was perfect... just read all the chapters one after the other ..just LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.. good work girl ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    I love the way you write. *sigh* I hope this isn't the end
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  • From ANON - daniella on November 02, 2006
    one of the best which i had read. really. nd ya know whats more better- i had read a lot of them. a very looooot of them. :) need see more of yours.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2006
    it will really turn people off from reading your story when you have spelling mistakes in the summary. Get a beta to help you fix them, also try reading your story to yourself aloud. It will help you improve your writing.
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  • From ANON - Lexy Malfoy on October 31, 2006
    Hey, it's been a while. Great update and FINALLY Hermione realizes her true feelings.
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  • From ANON - Luthi on October 31, 2006
    Yay! I love your story so much and I love the twist in this chapter! Please keep it up, it's really good work... I so hope their future won't BE bitter after all... they so deserve to be happy, to give up all their doubts and fears and everything and finally admit to each other what they've kept hidden for so long... Can't wait for more!
    Just to let you know I never stopped reading your story, though I didn't review the last few chapters ;)

    Cheers,
    Luthi
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  • From ANON - Magzie on October 31, 2006
    Chapter 13 is absoloutley amazing! I am glad to see you didnt take Dr Deuch's crtisizim and stop writing, I love this story so much and cannot wait to see how it ends, You truely have an amazing way of making words run together to explode with emotion! You are so my hero!

    Magzie
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  • From ANON - Magzie on October 26, 2006
    Me again.. I cam to the conclusion that DC Deuch Bag was a great substitute for what ever the name really was.. I only read your AN then i found his review.. Damm him and his im so fucking proper bullshit... Lets see.. this person is acting like my god damm english teacher.. maybe if they are some sort of professor they would have been professional enough to realise this is an, Adult Fan FICTION website where ADULTS write what they would like.. we are not here to be processed and evaluated on our grammer and skills.. so he can fuck his hat.. Anyways.. just keeping up with my normal.. I love love love this story and cannot wait.. for a new chappie.. obviously as shown above...

    Your my hero..
    And if anyone says your a bad writer they can fuck themselves because i think you are
    BRILLIANT!
    AMAZING
    WONDERFUL
    AWESOME
    TALENTED
    SUPER RAD!
    ok im done :P

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  • From ANON - Magzie on October 26, 2006
    I've been waiting so long for a new chappie and I check and theres ARROGANCE! Jeez! Not you.. DC deuch bag or whoever that was.. Dont take his comment to heart hun, Your story is AMAZING everything about it.. the plot, how he is trying to break her and I get it.. I get so much of it.. I also get your A/N.. war is black and white and I've been there, I have friends in Kuwait and Iraq right now and when i talk to them they show no emotion because they are stripped of it.

    Anyways I re read tainted white and your gramical errors are not bad at all.. If you are really interested in the story it doesnt take much at all to figure out what you are trying to say and its not like the words are 100% incorrect and you cant make out what it is suposed to be.. so fuck DC Deuch Bag and keep writing!

    I loooove this story and you are sooo my hero!
    Chappie Chappie Chappie Chappie.. write a new one sooon paleeeeeaaaaasssseeeee!
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