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Reviews for Tainted White

By : nera
  • From ANON - Malinda on October 14, 2006
    Well, of course I simply adore it!!!

    "You knew it then....you feel it now." Exquisite line! The entire story in a nutshell, right there. I could literally see him mentally tugging at her...feel her being physically pulled towards him, like an inner tug-of-war; until they both won and she was unable to deny it any longer. For how long had her 'defenses', her 'walls' been cracking, splintering, with panes of glass falling down around her; crashing to the floor? Not anymore...nothing left but Hermione; naked, bare, stripped down with no more excuses. No more rationalizations. No more running.

    I simply cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

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  • From absumoaevum on October 13, 2006
    sweet god.

    you have some amazing metaphors in that piece. The line breaks and broken sentences have a real effect on the story itself as well.

    I'm a fan. Love it.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 13, 2006
    wow, it's so awesome to the point of giving me goosebumps!!!! can't wait for the next stories!!! =DD
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  • From ANON - ladygryffindor on October 13, 2006
    I absolutely love this story! i shed some tears reading certain parts. i can feel the emotions between draco and hermione. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - gosia on September 24, 2006
    this story is honestly just amazing, some parts of it realli get to me, its soo well written wow ur talented
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  • From ANON - aprill on September 20, 2006
    wow , wow wowowowowowowowow
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  • From PinkTribeChick on September 14, 2006
    Okay . . . finally got Chapter 12 read . . . and it was okay . . . not as strong as the previous 11, but I know you had trouble with this one, and I feel your pain - cause I've been there before myself in my own writing. Anyway - keep up the good work, and more soon please! 8~D
    ~ptc~
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  • From ANON - Ayumi on September 09, 2006
    UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE SOOON!!......i do wish she'll stop regretting and just..fall for him already!!..haha..
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  • From ANON - Malinda on September 04, 2006
    "Alive again...after he died so many times.

    How cruel could life be?

    He never thought a day would come that his tears would mix with the blood he hated."

    OOOOOOH, those were some lovely lines! I'm so glad to read this new chapter and can't wait for more! I bet the moment of "truth" will be angsty and delightful!!! I can hardly wait!
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  • From ANON - T on September 03, 2006
    Sexy!

    I like, I like very much!

    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Lexy Malfoy on September 02, 2006
    God I LOVE this fic. Thank you so much for updating. I wonder what's coming next.
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  • From ANON - Carol on September 02, 2006
    Hi, congratulations, an other very good chap. Love how you write and the story.looking forward to see if she finely gives completly in. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Malinda on August 29, 2006
    WTF? How did I miss this update? I've been following this story religiously (as you know). I did notice that the title isn't in all caps anymore, but that's no excuse. Shame on me. I am SOOOOOOOOOOOO glad to hear that you have not abandoned it; I was beginning to lose hope. *cries* Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Rhen on August 14, 2006
    My God I love this story, I just finished the story but Iwanted to comment about the end of chapter 7 "He would rather kill her than ever let her leave" that was such a fantastic line, I LOVE that line kind of deranged obessessed with a touch of fluff to it.
    I hear your having problems with the next chapter, since I have no idea where you want to go with this I can't help too much but I have one suggestion.
    From Draco's POV have Harry and Ron show up (FOr what reason I haven't got a clue) and maybe have Hermione see them but Draco sees her before Ron and Harry can see her or before Hermione can say anything (She's in shock) Draco stopps her from making her presence known and locks her in her room.
    Sorry if this is a stupid suggestion, but I thought it might be intresting. It would help if you want to amp up the angst.
    Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on August 13, 2006
    Your doing great!! Don't get discouraged.
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