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Reviews for Before She'd Ever Been Born

By : avari20
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - sayyida on October 04, 2006
    oooo... this was grreat. dark and yet... it makes you wonder....
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  • From ANON - Bambu on October 01, 2006
    This is an extremely difficult pairing to write believably in a one-shot... but you not only managed it, you did it with fluid ease. I especially liked your ending. He doesn't care about her, only about getting his own way, and you showed that very clearly throughout.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Dylan on July 23, 2006
    It's a shame you've marked this as a one shot.
    I would like to read about the rape, and Hermione's reactions to it, and the knowledge that Lucius will not let her go afterwards.
    Please add another chapter. This is so good. I much prefer these L/Hr fics, where Hermione fights every bit of the way, while Lucius takes her forcibly, rather than the "I'm so ooc, I'm in love with an evil Deatheater" fics.

    Would begging on bended knees make you add another chapter?

    Great job.
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  • From ANON - FictionalBadGuyLover on July 23, 2006
    People are constantly writing about Lucius and Hermione falling in love and they lived happily ever after (not that I don't enjoy those sometimes ;D). That or Hermione realizes, depsite her knowledge of what all Lucius has done and that he is a Death Eater, she falls in love with him anyway... and live happily ever after. This one, however, is different... HE is the one with the obsession... HE is the one that initiates it... HE is the one who is unable to resist... and HE is the one that loses control. I also like that you used the whole "guy pulling on your hair" idea... his causing her pain because he loved her and wanted her so badly.

    Just when I thought that there was no chance that I would ever find a story like this one. Very well done, kudos to you. I had actually thought about writing one myself, but found I couldn't quite get the theme right. Thank you for writing it, it certainly made my day.

    >: Heidi Hoe
    FictionalBadGuyLover
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  • From ANON - xIsisx on July 17, 2006
    you muuuust make another chapter, pwetty pweeez??
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  • From ANON - rnc4 on July 05, 2006
    I love all of your stuff, and this one was amazing as well. Are you going to continue it?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 18, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on June 04, 2006
    The best LM/HG story I have read yet. Bloody amazing!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on May 31, 2006
    That was so wonderfully beautiful!

    I am so glad no annoying Gryffindorks came to ruin what Lucius had worked so hard(no pun intended) for.
    This is such a far cry from the other two stories of yours that I follow faithfully on here as well as on LJ! You are such a great writer, I am so impressed with this story, it being so different from the others.

    I love this.
    I would love to see this continue, not sure if you are going to, but it would be great. I know I am probably not the only one who thinks that this was awesome!

    Great job!
    ~Isa
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  • From ANON - citten on May 25, 2006
    This is a great story, PLEASE DONT STOP IT HERE!
    hope to read more soon!
    love ya
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