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By : dolceamara
  • From ANON - dolceamara on June 06, 2006
    Min-

    heheh I wish that on a daily basis! it's hard to imagine any sort of sexual scenario with Draco where he isn't in control :P
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  • From ANON - min on June 06, 2006
    oyhhhh very very steamy..... I hope though when it somes down to it, Draco will be the one in control
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  • From ANON - tonca666 on June 04, 2006
    Very good story. Continue.
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  • From ANON - miko on May 28, 2006
    This is awsome so far!!!!! I loved the way you descirbe Draco! The Master indeeed!!!! I hope theres more to come soon Well done!
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  • From ANON - dolceamara on May 27, 2006
    Thanks for your imput. I had thought about that and I knew it would be a HUGE plot hole but I couldn't really come up with anything concerning Snape that would add anything to my story. So, I decided to leave it as is instead of trying to explain another tangent. :P However, if something does happen to come to me, I might go back and edit it. I hadn't planned on the potions class or Snape being main players in my story. I hope that it wasn't too distracting, though I could understand how it could be. Thanks for reading ^_^
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  • From ANON - xXDraco is 4 LOVERSXx on May 27, 2006
    I like this fic so far.
    Except you have one major mistake.
    If you're going on Post-HBP, I doubt Snape would even walk into Hogwarts, or he wouldn't survive being seen in public.
    The man who killed Dumbledore can freely waltz about the castle.
    Perhaps you should clarify the situation better because otherwise, using Post-HBP, it doesn't make any sense.
    Hope that helped!

    loves.
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  • From ANON - Brf526 on May 26, 2006
    You have a nice little beginning here. All I suggest is that you do a little editing. You have some errors in typing which kind of deter the eye, but other than that, I like what you have. Continue reading. And if you need a beta, there are tons out there. I'd even do it for you.
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