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Reviews for Who, What and Where am I?

By : BlindedHP
  • From lizkrohn on February 22, 2015
    Please finish this story
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  • From ANON - heartstar on September 08, 2012
    I would liek to see where you take this please.....
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  • From HeartStar on February 07, 2010
    oh wow... please update this I wat to see where you go with it.
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  • From star2000shadow on December 01, 2008
    just finished chapter six. and he is keeping remarkable true to form for people who've been raped or..hurt as children. even if only ..err.. even if it only happens once. 'blinks'
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  • From soloflamelady on January 21, 2007
    I love the way the characters are coming together in this the emotions are great i just love angst. please update soon
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  • From ANON - Zafaran on December 31, 2006
    Any chance of getting more chapters on this story anytime soon? You've got an intriguing beginning to this story, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the remaining chapters. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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  • From ANON - reb Riddle on October 10, 2006
    I can
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  • From ANON - Mich on September 25, 2006
    How do you come up with these themes. It is great and really emotional. You havn't updated for a while. I hope you are going to continue. I am really interested how Sev and Harry are working through this.

    Take care!
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  • From ANON - prettydelial on August 14, 2006
    I really like this story, and I hope you update soon. It's very angsty, yes, and very well written as well.
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  • From ANON - Bria on July 28, 2006
    Oh, can't wait for the next chapter. I want to see where this is going. Harry's starting to sound like me, actually, only all my shit's only in my head. ^^ Update soon.
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  • From ANON - o_rly on July 24, 2006
    Gah, all of that angsty stuff at the end makes ME feel all angsty! Perhaps you could make Harry actually enjoy life rather than wallowing in misery for once... it'd make my mood a lot more better! :P

    Anyway, I was just wondering if you'd like me to be your beta-reader! I've had a bit of experience in beta-reading, but that was in other fandoms. I think I'm good with fixing grammatical mistakes, as well as spelling, punctuation errors, which would make your stories a lot smoother to read, because I have noticed just a few things that disrupt it (not too much, though :p). Obviously, you don't have to accept (or you could just basically tell me to piss off and leave you alone), but the offer is there anyway.

    That was too short and pathetic, but meh.

    I like the story so far and am hoping for an update in the near future! :)

    P.S. your email account on your profile page no longer works... :hint hint:
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  • From ANON - Roach on July 21, 2006
    It started out with a very original plot and a unique way to portray time travel, but I have to say, it's turning into just an ordinary Severus/Harry hurt and comfort story. You seem to spend a lot of time on the depressing thoughts Harry and Severus have, but it just doesn't move, if that makes sense. Probably not...

    What I mean is, while I love angst and Harry and Severus comforting each other I don't want to read chapters upon chapters of their depressing thoughts. It just ends with me getting depressed and thinking about what I have to be depressed about myself and that is never a good thing. And Harry keeps leaving when confronted with a problem. You mentioned in a chapter that he wasn't a Gryffindor for nothing. Where is his brave side?

    On the other hand -besides getting somewhat depressed- I did enjoy reading it thus far. You've several grammar things that make me go back and read a sentence over and over again so as to understand it, but that's fine. I do remember in one chapter you used 'abusive boy' instead of 'abused boy,' but someone already mentioned that.

    I'm sorry. I'm not very good at telling someone the good points to a story, am I? I've been trying for the last couple of paragraphs to tell you the good side to your story, because there definitely is one, but the words seem to just transform into something bad.

    Well. Just know that I did like reading it so far and will wait for the rest of it. Despite the negative points I could not help but mentioning, I found enjoyment from this, and that's good, yes?

    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2006
    Where is Sirus in this story? I know its supposed to be centered on Harry and Snape working out their issues but..still..seems like there should atleast be some mention of Sirus. In the beginning of the story You had Vernon make Harry perform a blow job...did that continue through his child hood as well?
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  • From ANON - Mel on June 29, 2006
    I love that chapter. Snape talking to himself was a much needed part of the chapter as Harrys dark and depressing thoughts brought tears to my eyes which happen to be rolling down my cheeks at this moment. But hey, a very good chapter please update soon
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  • From ANON - heksie on June 20, 2006
    A bit confusing in the beginning - Great fic.
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