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Reviews for Who, What and Where am I?

By : BlindedHP
  • From ANON - Stormy on June 15, 2006
    Okay, let's get this over with: Potter on the other hand was shaking like a leave. That should be leaf, not leave. An easy mistake to make.

    Good chapter, I have to say I did not see that coming. I like the way you portray Malfoy, very canon and he's a hard character to write in character because he is such a jerk. I also love the way that Snape responded and how his Slytherins reacted to him singling out Malfoy. You are getting much better at this and I love the direction the story is taking and putting it in Harry's point of view really gave us a feel for him and made him grow up a little in the story. I wish you would integrate Ron and Hermione a little more. They really are his friends, Hermione especially, would notice that he was withdrawing from them. I hope my reviews are helpful, I always try to give a little constructive criticism so please don't take it personally. If I didn't like your story, I wouldn't bother.
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  • From ANON - Stormy on June 15, 2006
    You know, I THOUGHT that English may not be your native tongue. You're doing an AMAZING job for someone who doesn't speak English as a first language. This was my favorite chapter so far, the plot is starting to develop a little better and you stopped rushing. You can really see how injured they both are and what they are both feeling is common for people in real life who have suffered abuse. I like the interaction between them, very in character especially for Snape. You may want to try to write Harry a little more in-depth so he doesn't feel so cardboard, although we started to get a look at his character in this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Stormy on June 15, 2006
    I love your story. I love the fact that they hate eachother and yet they felt sorry for the other boy that they turned into. I like the way you portrayed that effects of such abuse in such a serious manner. However, yes you did rush a little and that is a problem. Why? Because Harry still feels like a little boy and the way you wrote him made him feel like a child. So I may have a problam with the upcoming slash pairing unless you pull it off brilliantly. Good story, though you need to work on your plot development.
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  • From ANON - Briar on June 15, 2006
    I love this you have to write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Kateri on June 14, 2006
    Very interesting chapter
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  • From ANON - Robin on June 14, 2006
    So sad. So realistic it's shocking.
    Keep going
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on June 13, 2006
    *wipes away tear* please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on June 12, 2006
    I really like what you have written so far. I like a slow build up, and I like the fact that they had the opportunity to walk in each others shoes. Keep writing! I look forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on June 12, 2006
    *wide eyes* Update, please!! I neeeed to know what's going to happen next!
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  • From ANON - Mel on June 12, 2006
    Loving all the chapters of this story, like the heart clenching feeling i get when i read what Harry says i dont think that snape is out of character and your doing a brill job of keping him in character. Keep up the hard work
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2006
    Now THAT is a damned good piece of work!!
    Your style of writing is so perfectly crafted. This has become one of my top five favourite pieces of writing even and that's not just concerning Harry Potter fanfictions. I could burble on for ages but the short and long of it is: YOU ROCK.
    Can't wait for more.

    Smdbz Girl
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  • From In2Deep on June 10, 2006
    i think that sev is a little OOC but given the circumstances anyone would be! dispite the OOCness i think that he is acting like a slythrien(sp?) but yeah up-dates soon please!
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  • From ANON - Robin on June 07, 2006
    'Poooor Malfoy' Hehehe, serves him right
    You know, people who don't have English as a first language often do better in spelling and grammar
    I don't
    but you do (no offence to English speakers)
    I am quite interested in where the story is heading and what way it takes to get there.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on June 07, 2006
    Oh my, poor Harry. That was so wicked of you, poor little damaged Harry.
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  • From ANON - L4ETJE on June 05, 2006
    NOPE THIS WAS A GOOD CHAPTER
    KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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