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Reviews for You Are My Own

By : ArmyChick85
  • From ANON - Tjay Motou on June 28, 2006
    Okay. This isn't a flame... but you are writing is past and present tense at the same time throught the whole fic. My best advice is pick one or the other... because this just doesn't work. Also I would advise on getting a Beta Reader if you don't already have one.

    I like the fic overall, but it would be better if you would use only one tense...

    Also feel free to email me if you want...

    Later Dayz,
    Tjay Motou
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  • From ANON - t on June 26, 2006
    why did you have to kill him?
    i'm crying my eyes out!
    i love this story, its BRILLIANT!
    looking forward to much more of your work!
    this story is just AMAZING!
    love t
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 18, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - rox4787 on June 05, 2006
    love it it was so sad it made me cry so so so sad
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  • From ANON - sheedy on June 05, 2006
    WOW!! That was great...sad but great!
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  • From ANON - kris.t!n.e on June 04, 2006
    you did an absolutly great job on this!!... i had tears in my eyes by the end, it was breaking my heart... so bittersweet... so beautiful... you write really great d/hr fic.. i can't believe this is only your second.

    keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Cherrylips on June 04, 2006
    'She wants to tell him he matters.'

    Ah, gets me everytime I read it.

    Great writing. :D
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  • From ANON - Lexy on June 04, 2006
    This was absolutly beautiful. I loved it and damn it...you made me cry!

    Great fic!
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  • From ANON - slykitten on June 04, 2006
    Omg, you made my eyes tear up. I'm so angry with you. Loved the story!
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