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Reviews for Rebirth of the Serpent

By : tigerluver
  • From ANON - anon on August 29, 2006
    1)Ron + Hermione + Ginny = laughingstock of the school
    2)kill Lockheart off early
    3)I think your Draco is a little out of charecter but only the slightest bit (still VERY good)
    4)Cedric should live
    5)Basilisk Lives (GLORY TO THE SERPANTS!!!!!!)
    Update soon please! I luv it
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  • From ANON - Dove on August 28, 2006
    Hello:
    I enjoyed your story so far please continue writing.
    1) I think Ginny should die making it look like an accident. And that Ron and Hermione should be dung bombed?
    2) Yes you should still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year and eliminate him at the end of the year.
    3) Draco is out of character enough.
    4) I don't know if Cedric should die or not.
    5)The Basilisk in the Chamber shouldn't die, maybe make him friends with Harry's snake.
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  • From ANON - Lord Potter on August 28, 2006
    Good Chapter update soon and to answer your questions

    1 You Should make harry and the twins humiliate them in hogwarts.
    2 You Should make the Basilisk kill him early on.
    3 He is Fine but he is a little too much out of character
    4 He should die or he could be sent back alive with his memory wiped out.
    5 No The basilisk shouldnt die it should be kept at hogwarts as a secret weapon.
    Update Soon

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  • From ANON - Rectorlamia on August 28, 2006
    1) O__O You shouldn't ask me questions like that I'm sadistic XD
    2) THROW HIM IN THE CHAMBER AND GET RID OF HIM EARLY, Have Harry do it.
    3) He's Good.
    4) NUUU HE SHOULD LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!
    5) NO LeT ...she...he be Harry's familiar or something don't kill 'em.
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfBeyond on August 28, 2006

    1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks. Does Hermione know of the Weasley's betrayal? Because she could come over to the Dark Side with Harry maybe...
    2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story? you could eliminate him early and replace him with a Dark Side teacher
    3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough? no he's definitely in character
    4) Should Cedric die? I honestly don't know...
    5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die? no

    keep the good chapters coming!! :)

    Spirit


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  • From ANON - Amazon on August 27, 2006
    2) Keep Lockhart. Its good to keep as much of the original story as possible. Plus hes fun to fuck around with.
    3) I think hes a bit more father-boytoy than in the books. But okay.
    4) Yes.
    5) Not if Harry is going to be loyal to the Dark Lord. And its always good to have a 100+ foot serpant at your beck and call.
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  • From ANON - Lady Voldemort on August 27, 2006
    I love this story!! I think the basilisk in the chamber should stay alive! i dont know what should Happen to Hermione, Ron, and Ginny but it should show just how evil the twins can be!
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  • From ANON - lazycrazykitten on August 27, 2006
    1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
    You could always have Ginny die in the chamber, or some 'mysterious' letters that have something rather nasty show up to them.

    2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?
    You can have the basilisk eat him/kill or have him 'mysteriously' disappear.

    3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
    I think Draco is fine the way he is.

    4) Should Cedric die?
    It is only proper, but you don't have to.

    5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
    No I rather like the basilisk.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2006
    1)I realley have no ideas about pranks!
    2)Let him be a teacher a little bit.
    3)I think he
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  • From ANON - Elda on August 27, 2006
    *sob* Update sooner *boohoo*
    Anyways:
    1. I don't like slightest at all of them (Ron, Hermione, Ginny) stinking little rats! So ungrateful and all! You should just kill them or make them suffer. But ultimately; realize what wrong they've done!
    2. Eliminate him (Lockhart) is my opinion. Put someone else to the picture, like senior Malfoy or something.
    3. Nah... It's good for Draco to be OOC a bit, besides I want him to be good buddies with Harry.
    4. Well... It's not exactly an issue wether Cedric should die or not. As long as he isn't meanie towards Harry he can freely be alive in my opinion but if he gets on the nerves I suggest you to eliminate him.
    5. Naaaah... The basilisk is Voldies pet so let it live.
    Please update soon! I love your story!!!
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  • From ANON - Caristina(To lazy to log) on August 27, 2006
    1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
    Have the twins turn Ginny's hair white and give her boils. (always wanted to do that to her >.
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  • From ANON - Fallen on August 26, 2006
    Sorry I only answered 3,4,and5 I don't know for the others.
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  • From ANON - Fallen on August 26, 2006
    First things first good chapter and please update soon.
    I like Draco and think Harry and Draco would make ome good pranks together at school.
    No because than it would make some problems between Voldemort and Harry But You can if you want.
    I don't think so because the basilisk can look at for Harry in school.
    Again Just my ideas totally up to you. LOVE YOUR STORY!!!

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  • From ANON - HPLV luver on August 26, 2006
    1) Harry might be able to set a boggart on them...heehee
    2) Dunno
    3) He's just fine
    4) It should be nice to set him up with Dray
    5) ...please don't let her die....
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  • From ANON - lilith on August 26, 2006
    HI, I like your story! Here some answers:

    1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
    2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?

    Keep Lockhart and prank them with him! Make Ron sign all those fanpost and make a fool of him in duelling class. Make Hermione fall helplessly in love with Lockhart and follow him everywhere untill he hides from her! And humilate Ginny with those priceless dwarfes. How about writing her several loveletters about her hair which is just like a burning whomping willow, and her eyes which are shiny like galleons, sung in the worst way possible, while the dwarfes chase her all over the shool. They deserve it! *chuckles evilly*

    3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
    Draco is just perfect.

    4) Should Cedric die?
    Yes.

    5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
    I'm undecided. On the one hand, it would make Harry a hero, which he could use against Dumbledore. On the other hand, he could fake it and send the basilik to help Voldemort. But what use would the basilik be in the shool? Its too obvious to be a secret weapon. Except if it could be shrunk somehow and become Harry's pet.

    Oh, and I have an idea, but its probably ridiculous. How about making Riddle possess Ginny completely, untill she becomes Riddle. He would be female, but Voldemort and Harry would have a spy in Gryffindor and Ginny would be gone! (I hate Ginny)

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