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From ANON - Mukuro Meki on August 26, 2006
I trust you as the auther to make a decent decion but don't I repeat don't kill the pretty snake (the baskilask) >_< (can't spell)
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From ANON - Nita on August 26, 2006
GREAT!!!! LOVE IT!!!!! ssssssooooooooo cant wait for more....1)ginny should die ya no instead of being saved by harry and tom would be all young again...pranks i dont no.....2)yea sure keep him...i wonder how he should go....3)love him...and don't think he should change cause harry needs somebody else to talk to his age on the dark side ya no.....4)
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From Reamar on August 26, 2006
Whoo! I get to give my opinion again! (thesse are my opinionss...ignore them if you want to, I don't care)
1) *smirks evilly* you musst have Ron be attacked by sspiders...Hermione sshould have a cursse put on her that makess her forget how to read (or ssomething along thosse liness). Ginny...hmmm...I don't know of prankss for her but I really want to ssee her die. (I really don't like Ginny.)

2)I don't like Lockhart at all, but if he were to teach he sshouldn't make it through the year.

3)I think Draco iss pretty IC, he sseemss fine to me.

4)It'ss up to you. If it were up to me a lot of people would die.

5)DON'T KILL THE BASSILISSK! Pleasse don't kill it.

I can't wait for the nexxt chapter, pleasse update ssoon.
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From ANON - megara1 on August 26, 2006
yeah updates!!!!
answers
die, die, he's fine, no, and no
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From ANON - kyoko-chan on August 26, 2006
1) Ginny could be snake fodder. Perhaps kill Ron and Hermione off later.
2) I'd keep Lockhart, idiots are fun to kill.
3) Draco's fine.
4) Cedric... do you wanna keep the tournament or not? Is Voldemort reborn this year or not?
5) Keep the basalisk. Ginny is a nummy treat.
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From ANON - Lord Potter on August 23, 2006
one of my questions were cut off the mark one
3 no maybe only as voldemorts mate
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From ANON - Lord Potter on August 23, 2006
I forgot to add one question to mine
10 nope i like ansewring them its fun update soon
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From ANON - Lord Potter on August 23, 2006
Awesome story plz update soon And to Answer your questions
1 Yes he should be resorted to slytherin.
2 The twins should and maybe neville only if he gets his revenge or Maybe a truce on lestrange
3 No he shouldn't be marked maybe only as
4 This Year
5 On Voldemorts side and they should have a truce
6 Yes Plz
7 Maybe an ancromantula u know those spiders in the forest
8 super powerful
9 Maybe A type of Shadow Pheonix and maybe something like a shadow wolf
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From ANON - Crystalnight on August 22, 2006
Wow I liked the story Please keep writing

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From ANON - Madd Girl on August 20, 2006
Yes Harry should be resorted into Slytherin that would give the Light a heart attack. The twins should be on Harry's side and mabye Neville. Harry shouldn't be marked, as much as he gets injured someone would notice. They all shower together too remember. Voldemort should come back in second year, but no one except Harry and the Malfoys should know until fourth year. That way it'll be close to canon. Snape should be Dark and come to an understanding with Harry. Yes Ginny should die in second year when Voldie comes back. Harry could have something like a black pheonix as a third familiar. Yes he should be super powerful. Then get back at Dumbledore for underestimating him. His animagi could be a grey wolf, a black leopard, an eagle, a basilisk, and a cat or mabye a stag like his dad. I like these questions they're fun!!
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From ANON - Jolly Vodka on August 20, 2006
1)Yes, Slytherin
2)Yeah sure
3)Yep
4)No idea
5)Light side
6)Why not
7)Arctic fox
8) Extra powers
9)One, a raven
10)Eh
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From ANON - LuciusLover on August 20, 2006
I am really looking forward to reading your updates. I do think that Harry should be resorted (he really is a Slytherin at heart, at least to me); I think the twins and possibly Neville should stick by him (the only Weasleys I really think are genuine are Bill, Charlie, and the twins); Harry should not be marked (he should have the Death Eaters be marked a second time by him); Voldemort should come back this year (I really dislike Ginny); Snape should be on the dark side with Harry being his new prized pupil, along with Draco (no matter how hard I try I can never think of Snape as 'light'); Ginny has to die to bring back Voldemort (did I mention I really really dislike her); Harry's third familiar should be a shadow pheonix (I've read other fics with them and they seem the perfect familiar for a dard lord); Harry should only be slightly more powerful than Dumbledore and Voldemort (fics that have him a all-powerful are just too cheesy for words though some are rather amusing); Harry should be able to turn into any kind of snake, a shadow pheonix, and/or a thestral (snake obviously for his ability to talk to snakes, shadow pheonix because I think they are cool, and a thestral because he has seen a lot of death and violence his whole life and won't be visible to many 'light' sided individuals). I hope the suggestions help. I am also having issues with deciding where my own fiction should go.
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From ANON - joker on August 19, 2006
hey cool story, the dark lord should come back 2nd year ginny should die. Percy and the twins should back harry.
voldermort should be possessive of harry and his friendships harry has with others.
severus and him should be allies.
harry should be a white tiger, red belly black snalke and an albatross for his amiagus forms.
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From ANON - Yukiko_xAkuma on August 17, 2006
Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? "I think that he should go into Slytherin, but if you could find a way to make that the hat asked for the resorting it would be cool because no one would blame Harry and then they wouldn't know that he turned his back on them."

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? "Yes, I think the you should make it they are on Harry's side."

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)"No, I don't think there is really any point because I think only the followers get marked not the dark lords themselves."

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? "I think this year would be better."

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)"I think Snape should be on Voldemorts side, and if mabye you could put him with Lucius I would love you."

6)Should I kill off Ginny? "No."

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)"A shadow wolf, that he can talk to through mind link."

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? "Super powerful that way he can protect Voldemort and his followers and they can really long and still be younge."

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)" A Bassilisk, Raven, Gryphon, Badger, and a black panther. I think it would be cool if he could turn into all the animals from the differnt Hogwarts Houses."

10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! "I love the questions I've never been able to give my insight with this much indepth that is on a story before I love it."

Bye thanks for asking hope I could help some bye.
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From ANON - beth on August 17, 2006
Wow, i ended up with a lot of different ideas for this story. i have more than this, but i don't want to tell you how to write your story or anything. if you want to hear the rest i could email you. anyway, here are my opinions so far:

1.) Harry should definitely be resorted, but don't place him in slytherin as: one, it's way overdone, i think, and two, it would totally make dumbledore suspicious of him, esp. as he already made that comment about the dark corrupting him. i think he should be sorted into ravenclaw after he decides to turn over a new leaf and learn as much as he can in order to destroy dumbledore and his followers. Also, in order for that to work it would need to take place later in the school year, and there would need to be a *really* good reason to resort him because Dumbledore won't want to lose his weapon and will want to keep him close to Ron and Hermione. Maybe make it an issue of his safety or something.

2.) There are several ways you could go with this. If you keep Ginny alive, I think you should have her turn dark. If you decide to kill her off, then obviously it doesn't matter. As for the rest of the Griffs, I don't think they have the potential to be that dark. A lot of people have mentioned having Neville on Harry's side, but I don't think that would work. One he just doesn't seem to be DE material at all. Also, there's the whole issue with Bellatrix and his parents; I just don't see him as being able to ally himself with those that tortured his mom and dad. I mean, hello, the boy is afraid of his own shadow. I see the twins as being pretty neutral in this story, capable of going either way. I think it's too early to decide which way they'll go. The only other one I could see supporting the dark side is Lavender but not because she believes in "the cause" but because a lot of the pureblood aristocrasy has death eater ties, and she would want to be part of that aristocrasy. But then I don't really see her as a death eater, but maybe the future wife of one. Whatever you decide, only pick one or so because more than that would be noticeable. I think Ginny would be a good person to spy on Griffindor for Harry because everyone seems to underestimate her and she'll be in the thick of all the weasleys to boot.

3.) Harry shouldn't be marked because that would make him subservient to Lord Voldie. However, it would be cool if they had their own mark so they can communicate and meet up with each other. but i wouldn't place it on the left forearm because that could be too easily connected to the dark mark. ;)

4.) This depends on what you want to do with Ginny. If you decide to kill her off then he could come back in the chamber of secrets. But if you want Ginny to turn dark then LV shouldn't come back until 4th year. I think her experiences with the diary would make an excellent way for her to be introduced to the dark side of magic. It's also a way to make Ginny loyal to Harry, etc.

5.) Snape is a slytherin--he wants to be on the winning side. My vote is that Snape was never loyal to Dumbledore in the first place, but he's got an alibi on Dumbledore's side if things don't work out with the Dark Lord. When he realizes that Harry has defected to the Dark Lord's side, it only reinforces his loyalty to the dark. If they are on the same side, then yes they'll need to come to some sort of truce.

6.) No. Unless you aren't going to make her turn dark... they hell yes, let her burn.

7.) I think a phoenix would be wonderfully ironic. Make it like the opposite of Fawkes. Black feathers with blue and indigo tips. Evil!phoenix *beg* they have great healing properties etc. plus we've seen Fawkes do some nifty things like flash notes to people etc. that could be really useful.

8.) No don't make harry superpowerful. Make him Voldemort's equal. He should be strong but not unrealistically so. He is after all only a teenage boy. He needs to grow into his powers.

9.) A snake form for one of them, obviously. Definitely something with wings as he's such a natural flyer [and if he's sorted ravenclaw the house mascot would do nicely]. And then something small and inconspicous like a butterfly so that he can hide in plain sight so to speak. Whatever you decide, i think that he should only tell people he has one form and keep the others secret...well except from Dear Voldie, naturally.

10.) Not at all. otherwise, i wouldn't bother answering them ;)
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