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By : tigerluver

From ANON - lostmysoulinthenight on August 17, 2006
hello tigerluver,

I love the way your story goes, I prefer a bit dark!harry and a not so evil as we thought voldermort because Dumbledore is just a minipulative old pervert (srry if you don't think so..).

I answered your questions, hope you can use them.

|1| No, why would Dumbledore allow that anyway, it makes the story less believeble.
|2| Well I'm not the writer, but I like the twins because they never listen to their parents (so this could be one of those times) and Neville is too sweet to be mean to anyone.
|3| I'd rather not, it's a pretty ugly thing.
|4| Wait, so the new situation can evelope, I think (don't listen to me) that voldermorts return would be too much in one year.
|5| Voldermorts side, I mean he screams 'dark' , and an understanding with Harry...I think you could make that a good read...
|6| uhhh...that depends on the side your going to put her I guess...
|7| Some creature from the forbidden forest
|8| Just have a few extra powers, so he will actually have a hard time with the situation, so he will still act/look human.
|9| A black panther, would be gorgeous with his green eyes, or maybe some bird, because he likes flying
|10| questions are not really necessary as long as the story stays believeble, even in magic standards.

I hope these answers are of any use to you, and I'm sorry if my grammar is bad, English is not my motherlanguage.

lostmysoulinthenight
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From ANON - Katonie on August 17, 2006
Great story, I really love it! So, I'll give you some answers to your questions now;
1. Harry should be resorted( to piss Dumbles off) into Slytherin
2. Gryfindor should be on Harry's side but not Ginny( I dson't like her being in this kind of story) And Hermione should be a bitch that everyone loves to hate.
3. Harry should be marked( it'd be super HOT!)
4. Voldie should be brought back so he and Harry can bond sooner
5. Snape should be on Voldie's side and there shiould be an eventual understanding
6. Ginny must die (Bad Weasels!)
7. I have no clue what familiar Harry should have so go balistic with it :)
8. Harry should be super powerful because that's super hot and Voldie would LOVE that ( I'm sure!)
9. Harry's animagi form should be a white tiger! Then Voldie can run his hands through Harry's thick, sexy furr...heehee :)
10. If you really need answers then you should ask questions; so go ahead if need be.
Just for your info, if this review makes me sound like a bitch I'm sorry, I just adore these type of fics where Harry goes all dark and stuff :p
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From ANON - ryuuta on August 16, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
No, it's cliche

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
Only Lavender and Patil, if you wish to lead some Gryffindors to the dark side.
The others do not have any reason to - they are either mud-, halfblood or publicly opposed to Voldemort in canon. You can depict some of them trying to save their skin in the end by running over, but Harry and Voldemort would surely discover their real thoughts. Again, it would be cliche to make Ginny, Neville or the twins dark just because. The most I can see is neutrality for Fred, George and Ginny, but they would still care for their family.

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not?
If you want him marked then with a different mark from the dark mark.

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
This year, not many fanfics have used this opportunity. Maybe Harry should steal the diary and give it to Lockhart, then no students would die and the school would stay open, Harry would certainly do all to not go back to his relatives. Or else, in the chamber when Harry goes after Ginny with Lockhart, Tom could switch the person he's drawing the life force from and incapacitate or kill Lockhart instead of Ginny. They could redirect the blame for petrifying students and everybody would think it was the fault of another wacko Defence teacher.

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding?
Snape is on his own side, on the side that will win. If Harry wins in the end, Snape will be on Harry's side. Snape might come to understanding with Harry's power *snickers*. Or you could make this interesting and write Snape as the wily snake who dies after trying to heroically save the world from the Boy Who Lived.

6)Should I kill off Ginny?
No. Refer to answer 4)

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
Why does he need three? Alright, why don't you give him a unicorn. Better yet, the giant squid!

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
He should be a Slytherin. You can give him some nifty power but consider that the more powerful you make Harry, the more unbelievable your story becomes. On the other hand, some healthy lies and manipulation have never hurt the person who does it.

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be?
Please no more than one form, if even that. It should be a flying creature as Harry is a natural flyer.
>> Pegasus was a winged horse and good flyer. It was born from Medusa. The latter was a female monster with snakes for hair. When a greek hero cut her head off, drops of her blood fell into the Libyan desert and turned into snakes.
Tamed by Bellerophon the Pegasus served as his mount during his adventures including his slaying of the Chimaera- a monster with three heads: lion, goat, and snake. When Bellerophon attempted to fly Pegasus to Mount Olympus he was dismounted by Zeus. Pegasus continued on to Mount Olympus where the gods lived. Here Pegasus spent his days carrying lighting bolts for Zeus.
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From ANON - Darkstorm on August 16, 2006
Answers to ten questions
1. Yes either Ravenclaw or Slytherin
2. Neville perhaps
3. Not equil means equil unmarked
4. Either
5. Dark
6. Yes, I can't stand clingy or overbaring people
7. Some kind of large cat. Perferably black with blue eyes .
And please don't make the same mistake every one seems
too all the great cats have round puples much like a
humans do.
8. Though super powered Harry can be fun it get old. A few
extra powers
9. A Wolf
10. Questions are fine. But you could make your chaters a little long huh ?

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From ANON - REadER on August 16, 2006
1)I would like Harry to be resorted. How about Ravenclaw, he could be super smart.

2)No one should be on Harry's side

3)Harry shouldn't be marked

4)Voldemort should come back in the seconde year

5)Snape and Harry should have a truce.

6)Kill Ginny
7)He should have mythical creature as a familiar

8)Harry should be Voldemort's equal, but with a few special abilities.

9)I'm not sure. His animagus form should be cool. Maybe a black panther.

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From ANON - Tashia on August 15, 2006
i love the story so far. Bring more plot into it, not just dialog though. I need somethign to HOOK me...:) thoguh...it is rather addicting:) i love it XD

1)it woudl be cool for him to resort into slytherin...but then again....being in gryff has its advantages. :)
2)i think the twins..and maybe neville...but..not the weaslette...shes nice..but not the dark type
3)...he shoudl be marked..and also mark Voldy with his own mark..XD
4)hmm...he should come back...prolly best if its in the 4th thoguh...or...during summer before :)
5)snape...shoudl be on the side of harry...but still give him snide remarks..and kinda treat him bad...even if he is going to basically serve him...lol
6)naw...leave her alone :)...kill of herm...HAHAH
7)a cat...or soemthign like that...maybe a puppy...lol..a really tiny puppy...or a dragon :) like in the 4th movie..a REALLY tiny one
8)only a few extra powers....being uber powerful is too..over done...
9)i think...a dog..a panther (typical :p ) a pheonix, a snake, and something special..i dont know thoguh
10)i like them :) it gives you more ideas for plot
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From ANON - me on August 15, 2006
cool. i think that the twins and neville should be on harry's side, but not anymore than that. he probably wouldn't get the mark because that would give him away. i picture him as a cat or adda. but this is your story so you choose. its great so far! ADD MORE SOON! >( XD
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From ANON - SpiritOfBeyond on August 15, 2006
Ok, now you've got a choice. This is an opinion poll of sorts.

1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? no resorting, although if you do decide to do one, he should be put into slytherin
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? no.. well maybe ginny (see q. 6)
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.) no
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? this year
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) i think he should still have a concealed double act of sorts.. makes it more interesting
6)Should I kill off Ginny? no.. maybe have her follow harry to the dark side?
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) no idea...
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? super powerful! (*grins* i like dark, powerful, sex gods! haha)
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) snake, dragon?, um...
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! its interesting to have a say in a story... but i don't think there should be questions every times.. just a few, once in a while, if you get a little bit of a writer's block

good story so far, am looking forward to reading more!
Spirit
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From ANON - Rectorlamia on August 15, 2006
1)No, because then, it'll be harder for him to get THE WHOLE SCHOOL ON HIS SIDE *grins* Besides Hermione and Ron need to suffer, and the other weasels.
2)Yes, unless the Weasley's are really going to just betray him.
3)DOn't mark him, mate him, like with a ring.
4)This year, for example when he kills the book instead of destroying a Herocrux he releases Voldemort from some spell Dumblebore put on him.
5)Harry's side, because we all know he goes with Luc.
6)Only if she's going to be like her brother and his mudblood.
7)DARK LORD Is ABOUT TO RECIEVE A PUPPY!! And if that doesn't fit in your story, a smaller snake so he can carry it with him, or Nagini so Voldie and him can share their power.
8) few extra powers
9)Fox, Snake, Gryffin, Phenoix
10)NO THEY'RE FUN!!
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From ANON - Mira on August 15, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? Yes dose it have to be one if so then it need to be ravenclaw or slytherin .If not then he need to be in all and help convence the kids to join voldie.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
I think you should have the twins and Neville but not Ginny not in less you make her go with a slytherin lader on i the story and see the wongs she has done. (the others i have no say im a slytherin though and though)
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
He should be marked be not like other DE.He should have a diffent one to make him over the others.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
this year yup yup this year is good.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)i like your idea alot you have him on his own side till he know whos going to win(his a slytherin)
6)Should I kill off Ginny? No if your planing to bring tommy boy back you should kill off Hermione i hate her but its alkl gose together it matters how you want to tie it up.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)HE SHOULD GET A DRAGON but if you dont think he should have that big of a familiar he should have a grim (really big dog that can shadow walk)
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? Super powerful ya that sounds good
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
1 giffin
2 dragon
3 phoenix
4 a big cat of some sort
5 basilisk
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! yes i love qustions (it make me fell loved)
wow its long o well i love this story keep it up and ill love it how ever you make it
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From ANON - Artemis on August 15, 2006
Sorry my freakin computer sucks it cut off half my answers:

Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? Doesn
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From ANON - Artemis on August 15, 2006
I'm a lazy ass so I hope you don't mind me just pasting the questions and the answering them >,
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From ANON - Rosa on August 14, 2006
this is a really great story. these are my answer for the questions u asked:
1.Yes, Slytherin. 2.no i think just ginny, the twins, and neville. 3. Yes. 4.This year. 5.Voldemorts side. and yes they should. 6.No please don't. 7.A black phoneix 8.Super Powerful 9.Snake. 10. it is up to you, i think its cool that u do though.
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From ANON - sj on August 14, 2006
love it!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Zetunia on August 14, 2006
YES DAMNIT he needs to amke slytherin win and stuff...besides he looks hotter in green
Yup I like evil twins ^^ and all of them
No
Dunno....tom riddle is sexy though....I say now?
THE DARK SIDE! Make him with bellatrix or something....and uh....yesh they should be pretty ok with each other
yes
ooo make him buy a basalisk baby for the chamber or something ^^
Snake,Panther,...can he be a dementor

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