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From ANON - Zetunia on August 14, 2006
YES DAMNIT he needs to amke slytherin win and stuff...besides he looks hotter in green
Yup I like evil twins ^^ and all of them
No
Dunno....tom riddle is sexy though....I say now?
THE DARK SIDE! Make him with bellatrix or something....and uh....yesh they should be pretty ok with each other
yes
ooo make him buy a basalisk baby for the chamber or something ^^
Snake,Panther,...can he be a dementor

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From ANON - Zetunia on August 14, 2006
YES DAMNIT he needs to amke slytherin win and stuff...besides he looks hotter in green
Yup I like evil twins ^^ and all of them
No
Dunno....tom riddle is sexy though....I say now?
THE DARK SIDE! Make him with bellatrix or something....and uh....yesh they should be pretty ok with each other
yes
ooo make him buy a basalisk baby for the chamber or something ^^
Snake,Panther,...can he be a dementor

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From ANON - Zetunia on August 14, 2006
YES DAMNIT he needs to amke slytherin win and stuff...besides he looks hotter in green
Yup I like evil twins ^^ and all of them
No
Dunno....tom riddle is sexy though....I say now?
THE DARK SIDE! Make him with bellatrix or something....and uh....yesh they should be pretty ok with each other
yes
ooo make him buy a basalisk baby for the chamber or something ^^
Snake,Panther,...can he be a dementor

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From ANON - Zetunia on August 14, 2006
YES DAMNIT he needs to amke slytherin win and stuff...besides he looks hotter in green
Yup I like evil twins ^^ and all of them
No
Dunno....tom riddle is sexy though....I say now?
THE DARK SIDE! Make him with bellatrix or something....and uh....yesh they should be pretty ok with each other
yes
ooo make him buy a basalisk baby for the chamber or something ^^
Snake,Panther,...can he be a dementor

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From CarisNumber on August 14, 2006

1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? Yes. But if I was writing this I would actually put him in Hufflepuff so he could be near Cedric and form a "Darker friendship"

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? Yes the Twins HAVE to be friends of Harry! They are just that cool!

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)Dont Mark him Make him be a spy for the Dark Lord!

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? 4th year. (Thus my liking of Cedric and Harry making a "darker Friendship!"

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) Dark Lords Side. He just fits that far to well.

6)Should I kill off Ginny? Yes Please!!!!

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) Kneazle

A Kneazle is a magical cat-like creature closely related enough to cats to interbreed with them. A kneazle has large ears, spotted fur and a lion-like tail.

Kneazles are considerably more intelligent than the average cat, and have a few knacks, in particular the ability to detect suspicious people (to whom they react badly). Despite their occasionally aggressive nature, if domesticated they make good pets. Kneazles must be licensed if they become tamed in the event that a Muggle mistakes it for a cat.

Crookshanks, Hermione Granger's pet, is half-Kneazle, which explains why it recognises Scabbers, Ron's rat for Peter Pettigrew. Arabella Figg also breeds them, and it is therefore likely that at least some of her "cats" are Kneazles or part-Kneazle. As J.K. Rowling has explained on her official site, Filch's cat (Mrs Norris) is just a regular, intelligent and unpleasant cat.

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? I would make him stronger then Tom and Dumblie (I call him that I dont like him at all even in the book XD) but not some god that just makes it a little to easy.

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) I would Personaly vote on a Snake (think of the Black Mamba for its color/size) and maybe a black panther as well.

10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! Hmm am I fed up with the questions? Nupe ^-^ Always fun to help put ideas in the head of a writer.

Hope to see more soon and maybe longer. Good story over all.
good luck
Caristina
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From ANON - Mistress Vamp on August 14, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? He's got the cunning of a snake, but I think he is smarter than most give him credit for. I would love to see how he would be if he had been in Ravenclaw, but Slytherin is probably the best place for him.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? I'm not a big Ginny fan, but do what you want with her. I love Neville so yes, on Harry's side :)
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.) And destroy his golden skin? I think not! Besides, he becomes a Dark Lord, it will be easier to hide his true intentions without a glamour if he's not marked
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? Fourth Year
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) Voldemort's side
6)Should I kill off Ginny? I would say yes, but that choice is up to you
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) An owl, a snake, and a cat *grins*
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? As powerful as the Dark Lord
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) A fox
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! Er, up to you :)
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From ANON - xx-Keks on August 14, 2006
First, to your questions:
1)I think Harry hasn
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From ANON - fatchixrock2 on August 14, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? No. Keep Dumbledore thinking Harry's still 'good'.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? Yes. I like Neville and the twins!
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.) No. They're equals right? So why would he be marked as a follower?
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? This year!!!!
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) Snape should stay evil but not really like Harry. He hatred his dad so why like the kid?
6)Should I kill off Ginny? YES!!!
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) A crow or raven. Something cool like that.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? SUPER POWERFUL!!!!!!!
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) Raven (raven hair, raven, get it?) basalisk, and maybe a ............
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! MORE QUESTIONS!!!!!
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From ANON - twichy on August 14, 2006
please write more this story is awsome. i think tom should come bak this year and you should kill ginny. but the twins should still be harry's friends.
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From ANON - Athena on August 14, 2006
1)yes, Slytherin, where he should have been
2)yes
3)no
4)this year
5)Snape should be on Voldemorts side
6)yes
7)an eagle
8)inbetween
9)a snake, an owl, an eagle, a dog, cat
10)Dosen't matter
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From ANON - Elda on August 14, 2006
1) No resorting XD
2)Yes, they should be on Harry's side regardless of the side what Harry chooses.
3)don't know, you decide.
4)I can't wait to see Voldie and Harry make out, but Harry is still 12 years old and even if Voldemort would come back he'd be 16 and very unlikely to get attracted by Harry (maybe) and so should wait to 4th year (though I suggest you to find a solution on Voldemort's appearance since I doubt Harry will like snake-like-man XD
5)Snape should be on the side of Dark. It really doesn't suit him to be on the side of Light thus it would ruin the story, but that's only my opinion and this is your story :)
6)you decide
7)A tiger! I beg of you on my knees! Consider tiger (*lol* I've always wanted a tiger!)
8)Harry should be super powerful AND with extra powers ;)
9)Panther, A dark Phoenix, a small dragon(?), leopard
10)It's enough *lol*

Anyways thank you for the awesome chapter :) I've waited for ages and eagerly for you to update ^_^ Please update soon again, please?
Have fun with writing the next chapter :D
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From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes WE Think He Should Be Resorted (Red Does Nothing For His Complection) To Slytherin Or Ravenclaw
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
Ginny-No The Twins-Yes Neville-Yes(But He Gets Resorted To And Goes To Ravenclaw {WE Don't Know Why}) Rest Of The Lions-No
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
No He Should Get His Own Mark And A Different Name For His People (ie.LV Has Death Eaters Dumbles Has His Flaming Turkeys)
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
We Thought This Year Would Be Good But We Want To See How Portray Sirius
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
We Have Always Loved Sev On The Dark Side
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
YESSSSSSSSSSSSS
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
A Kitsune (Fox Demon[3 Tails To Start]) Or A (Shadow) Wolf Cub
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
Both We Think He Should Have A Magical Creature Inheritence(Part-Vampire, Dark Veela, Demon [Fox, Wolf, Dog, Snake, Neko(Cat) Etc...], Etc...)
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
A Snake (Of Course), A Shadow Wolf (An All Black Wolf With The Power To Move Soundlessly Through Solid Objects And Travels Through The Shadow[Something Of Our Own Creation It Belongs To Our Own Mythical(SP?) Creature Stories You Can Have It If You Like]), A Dark Phoneix, A Panther With Wings(Should Be A Different Color Then The Body And Retractable), A Blood Fox(A Dark Red Fox With 1 Tail For Evey Special Power They Acquire[Another One Of Our Creations My Favorite One In Fact You Can MAke You Own Powers Or If You Want The List Of The Powers They Get Email Us]
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
No We Love To Help And We Just Came Back To AFF.Net So Are Getting Back Into The Swing Of Things And We Are Gonna Beta For Some People On Other Sites So If You Ever Need Help Or Just Some One To Proof Me And My Brother Major In Writing :)
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From ANON - cobalt Tink on August 14, 2006
I would like to see Harry resorted. You can put him in Slytherin, but that's what everyone seems to do. You can put him in ravenclaw. If I remember my reading right the ravenclaws never have classes with the Gryfindors. I hope to read more of your story soon

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From ANON - person on August 14, 2006
1. Yes, he should be re-sorted to Slytherin.
2. All the Gryffindors EXCEPT FOR the twins should be against him. Fred and George should side with him.
3. No marking.
4. This year! XD I'm so impatient.
5. An uneasy truce.
6. Yes! Yes you should.
7. He should have a gecko. Why? Because I love gecko's.
8. He should be super powerful AND have a few extra powers. XD
9. A snake (obvious), a panther, and some form of cool black bird.
10. The questions are a good idea. Yay for reader feedback!
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From ANON - Kali Magi on August 14, 2006
1)Yes, Salazar's house... duh?
2)If you don't resort Harry make the Lions into his deatheaters.
3)If he is marked then if should be diff. b/c he isn't a lowly deatheater... maybe in a differnt place?
4)I would prefer this year so I can have more sex :-D
5)Snape should be on Harry's side and a truce would be cool.
6)Kill her to bring back Tom.
7)A bird like a raven or a phoenix.
8) BOTH but at equal pwr w/ Tom.
9)Some sort of snake, some sort of cat, something that flies, something cute and cuddly for Tom to play with, and something that swims.
10)No one must always ask questions to get reviewers to add input.

This is great so far keep it up.
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