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From ANON - Nita on August 14, 2006
SO WANT MORE!!!!! 1)hmm me no no bout that one...2)the twins, neville,maybe bill and charlie...3)no death mark but maybe a tatoo to signify somethin...4)i think maybe 4th...5)dark side totally...6)yea me think so all harry needs are the slytherins and the one who i want changed...7)hmm i like a wolf or something like one...8)super powerful or the same powers as voldemort...9)snake, panther, hmm dont know wat else will have to think...10)no not fed up sure ask more me dont care...have fun writin
-Nita
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From ANON - anne_rose_teen on August 14, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes,Slytherin
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
No way to all ,but the twins and neville.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
no too suspisius.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
He should come back this year looking like tom.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
Snape should be on the dark side. Harry will need his help to learn occlumency.
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
Yeah. I hate Ginny.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
He neads a mate for either hedwig or Max
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
Super Powerful.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
Deffinatly a snake and if he has mor than one he should be a stag becouse everyone would expect that.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
What are your plans with serius and remus because i love them.
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From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes,Slytherin
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
No way to all ,but the twins and neville.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
no too suspisius.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
He should come back this year looking like tom.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
Snape should be on the dark side. Harry will need his help to learn occlumency.
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
Yeah. I hate Ginny.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
He neads a mate for either hedwig or Max
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
Super Powerful.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
Deffinatly a snake and if he has mor than one he should be a stag becouse everyone would expect that.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
What are your plans with serius and remus because i love them.
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From ANON - lazycrazykitten on August 14, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? If he does it would have to be Slytherin.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? Maybe only the twins and possibly Neville. I really don't like most of the other Gryffindors.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.) If he is it shouldn't be as obvious as on his arm.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? Maybe merge his soul into his younger version in this year. But maybe not have it become public knowledge until 4th.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) You can really go either way and have him really up with Dumbledore or grudgingly admit to actually being on the dark side. It honestly doesn't matter.
6)Should I kill off Ginny? Yes. I really don't like her all star struck attitude. Off with her head!
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) Maybe something more magical like a Pheonix, but you might want a four legged animal and not a bird (so Hedwig doesn't get jealous!)a wolf would be pretty cool. And it is different.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? I'd personally like him to be above average but not super.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)Snake is always a given. But since owls are birds of wisdom, and he does apparently learn from his mistakes....yeah and owl would be nice.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! Not really. I mean if people don't like the questions they don't have to answer them. You don't even have to read our responses if you don't want to. Anyway I do love your story no matter how you write it I'm sure it will turn out fine. Happy writing.
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From ANON - andromedao on August 13, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
maybe but he would have to beg the hat again not to put him in slythrin yet maybe
ravenclaw where he could be seen talking to gryf and slyths and not but in trouble
with the other kids for it
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
i think the twins and neville should go dark with harry.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
yes but not with the dark mark but maybe a claiming mark
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
yes but only a few ppl should know that way they can surprise bumbledork
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
snape should be dark and make a truce with harry
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
yes
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
a drake (mini dragon), Phoenix, or other magical creature one that chooses and
bonds to their master so others cant take them away.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
a few extra powers
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
Snake, Panther, Wolf, and a magical creature or 2
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
i dont mind more questions. and i really love this story
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From In2Deep on August 13, 2006
ok i liked this chappie... things went a bit diffrent this time around!

1- yes, snake pit of course
2- and all the gryffs should be behind harry except for ron and mione, but have neville and the twins be the closest to him
3- i think that harry should be marked but make it a diffrent desine and in a diffrent place like on the nape of his neck
4- im going to have to say this year just becaus he'll look that much nicer and younger LOL
5- Snape should be on the 'dark' side and him and harry should come to a truce, their friendship should be more of an outlet. (meaning that they could get along but they fight with each other because it helps them get rid of their anger and controll their emotions!)
6- no i think that ginny should have the diary untill its thrown into the toliet and then mione should have it (by this time tom should be strong enough to take controll of her mind) and then die in the chamber
7- umm... a fox kit or a wolf cub...
8- he has to be as powerful as tom but when he turns 16 i think that he should get more powers making him stronger than dumbles!
9- Panther, Phenoix (Storm or Shadow), Wolf, Black Mamba (or another snake), i dont know
10- not really i kinda like them!
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From ANON - zelda on August 13, 2006
Great story I
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From ANON - domine on August 13, 2006
you're doing great so far, but could you make the chapters longer? here aremy answers to your poll:
1. leave harry in gryffindor, that way no one suspects him
2. yes, every lord needs followers and harry is the only one who can turn the gryffindors
3. don't mark him as a death eater, he and voldemort should be equal
4. don't disturb the continuity you've got going, you're story so far could actually be the truth behind events in the books
5. to fit with HBP snape should side with harry
6. keep Ginny, she is pureblood and would be useful if following harry
7. a wolf would be great for harry's other familiar
8. harry should definately be super, he already seems to be
9. just a few suggestions: stag, snake, owl, lion or wolf, and can a dragon be an animangus form? that would be awesome
10. i'm not fed up with your questions, ask more, just don't forget that YOU are the author, not us

keep up the good work,
Domine
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From ANON - escarien on August 13, 2006
1)Slytherin! It'd make the most sense. He's not very Ravenclaw-ish, nor very Hufflepuffly.
2)I like the idea of the twins being on his side, but not really so much with Ginny and Neville. Maybe the other Gryffindors can be split? I dunno.
3)Nah. Then it would be a bit like he was Voldemort's inferior, even if he wasn't, as Voldemort could give him pain through the mark. Besides, he's already got the scar connection, no?
4)This yearrrr! That way he could be Tom. : )
5)Dark!Snape is the best.
6)Yes! She bothers me. >.>
7)I have no idea. A cat of some sort?
8)Superly powerful is fun to read about, but neither is overly objectionable.
9)Hum. A snake? Annnnnd, uh. A spider? I'm not sure.
10)I really like the question idea! It's neat to feel like I have some input. :D
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From ANON - Rayven on August 13, 2006
Yay! Another update. I love this story. Here are my answers for your poll. Can't wait for your next update!!!! Peace, Love and Chocolate, Rayven
1)maybe, I always like when harry gets resorted but then there's something to be said about a snake in the lion's den. and he can keep an eye on the lying gryffindorks.
2)No, I think the Gryffindors are better being the bad guys. Except maybe Neville. I like Draco/Neville pairings in these types of stories.
3)I don't think that really matters. As long he's a dark lord it irrevelent.
4)Yes, but keep it a secret. Have Ginny obliviated when Tom/Voldemort returns, or kill her.
5)I think Snape should be on the dark side. And should become like an uncle/mentor to Harry.
6)Probably or obliviate her in the end.
7)Maybe a raven or cat.
8)Yes,keep Harry as powerful as Voldemort.
9)Panther, Wolf, Snake, Black Owl, and (up to 5)
10)It's up to you, I like being able to give suggestions on what'll happen next.
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From ANON - artemyl on August 13, 2006
1)No, since I doubt he would want Dumbledore to be more suspicious of him than need be, and resorting may very well do that since the hat originally did want him in Slytherin. But, eh, i don't really care...
2)My thought on this is twins on harry's side, Neville maybe neutral(since I really can't see him as a DE...), and Ginny against
3)No, since they are supposed to be equals.
4)This year would be cool, but it may be better to wait.
5)Snape and Harry make a truce.
6)Yes!
7)That's a bird and a snake.... so... maybe a wolf? or a fox, yeah, they're cute li'l buggers... hmmm... maybe something of the magical variety... So, maybe a young seven-tailed fox, or kumiko as i've heard them called, so maybe it'll have two tails instead since it'll be somewhat young... that'll be over 50 years i think...
8)Please, please, please, no super!harry. Yes, he's supposed to be more powerful than the average wizard, but don't take it overboard like i've seen so many authors do. I've only seen a couple of authors pull off a good story with that and only because they made Dumbledore and Voldemort about that powerful also. So, just make him stronger than the average wizard and give him a couple of extra powers.
9)I've always seen him as an avian of some sort since he is a natural flier. So I'd say: gyrfalcon, just for the hell of it: a basilisk, a roc, a wyvern

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From ANON - death906 on August 13, 2006
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? Yes. Slytherin or Ravenclaw.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? Not all the gryffindors maybe Seamus and the like. Yes to Ginny, the twins, and Neville. How about Charlie and Bill too.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)Nah. Let HIM mark others with a special mark.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) Voldemorts. ANd a good friendly understanding.
6)Should I kill off Ginny? Nah.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) A chimera, dragon, or a wolf.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? Make him equal too or a little more powerful tahn Voldemort and Dumbledore.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) Dragon, Basilisk, Black fire phoenix, and Griffin.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! No and keep up the good work! Ask more questions!
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From ANON - jenn on August 13, 2006
definitly Ginny and the Twins should stand by Harry. Bring Voldy back asap!!! Love the story
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From ANON - zoe on August 13, 2006
nice chapter I like how you have brought back the snake "max" from book 1.
as for your question poll
1)I dont think that Harry should be resorted he could be a valuble spy if he's in Gryfindor,
If you have to resort him my vote would go to Slytherin
2)I think The twins and Ginny should be on Harrys side, and mabey Semeus and Dean. But I realy cant see Neville turning to the dark side and still playing the roll of good little clumsy gryfindor.
3)My vote go for Harry being marked is No, Harry and Voldemort should be on a equal level, and If Harrys marked it gives the impresion that Voldemort is he's suppirior, and Harry is just a Death Eater with many privledges.
( And any way Harrys already marked by Voldemort His scar)
4) If Voldemort comes back in the 2nd year its easier to give him his 16 year old body, while if he comes back in the 4th year hell be all old
5)Im netural about Snape
6)Well if Ginnys going to be on Harrys side then my votes going to be keep her alive, but if you get vast numbers telling you she should be against Harry then kill her off
7)For Harrys 3rd Familiar, you could have fawlks. You could have Harry as the heir to Gryfindor and Fawlks could have been his familiar and is supposed to be passed on to the next generation, but Dumbledor stolle him and has him under some sort of enchantment that makes im incapable of going to Harry.
8) Super powerfull beings kind of spoil storys in my opinion, Harry should be more powerfull than most wizerwds( cough Dumbledor cough ) but he shouldnt have unlimited god like powers.
9) Animugus forms.... Stag, Snake, Panther, Eagle, Unicorn ( they should all be black with vivid green eys, and a small lightning shaped scar )
10) If you want you can keep asking questions wether or not Im bothered to answer them will be up to my mood for the day

Hope you update soon
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From ANON - Guest on August 13, 2006
I think that some of the Gryffindors should be on Harrys side, in most fics thet are all so black and white - quite boring to read, and it
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