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From LadyElaine86 on November 13, 2021
Please tell me you will be continuing this story I would really like to read more.

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From ANON - natasha on February 16, 2014
wow this is a really brilliant story:)* I just love the story line and I can't wait for there to be an update. please let me know when there is one.
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From ANON - Diana on April 17, 2013
2) Should still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?
Get rid of him early...
3) What do you think of Draco in my story?
I think Draco is fine in the story...
5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
NO!!! It can remain alive protecting the Chamber...

Update soon!
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From ANON - Diana on April 17, 2013
Update soon!
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From cagna4 on September 17, 2009
yay! you kept my 4 favorite weasleys on harry's side (gred, forge, charlie, and bill). i hope ginny doesn't turn tom on harry through all of her writing in the journal. please update when you can.
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From misaki on August 18, 2009
please let me know when u are updating this story. it's interesting. katrinadax@yahoo.com
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From MidnightVixen on May 27, 2009
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes. Slytherin of course.

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
Definately, but you already made Ginny bad...so screw Ginny.

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
Not really. it would be good for him to be on the darkside without having to worry about being caught. but if he is marked, it shouldn't be a death eater's mark. he should get his own. (cuz Voldie luvs him ^.^)

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
It should be this year. that way he can start his plans for revenge sooner. or it could be a temporary come back. like dumbledore did something to fuck him over.

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
Dark side of course. the best side to be. (they have cookies....AND YAOI)

6)Should I kill off Ginny?
I'm not to happy with her right now. but don't forget wat minnie said. if the monster isn't caught the school would close. i don't think harry would like that very much.

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
I was thinking he should have a magical cat. it would be cool. a cat with powers and can talk to harry and he wouldn't feel so alone and stuff even if he has max who can talk to him. and hedwig with her understanding.

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
a few extra would be good. we don't want harry to be some kind of supped up being right. he should be a bit powerful, very evil, yet slightly dependent on Voldie. (i love a vunerable harry. evil, but vunerable)

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
a black eagle
a black wolf
a black and silver snake (magical)
a wild cat of some sort
a black phoenix (anything of a different color may imply that he's with dumbledore and we all know that's a lie)

10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
I'll only be pissed off if you totally ignore all of the answers i gave you. my arm is hurting. pout
Don't forget to look at these things. i really would be pissed if u don't look at them at least.

1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
I will be glad to assist you in any way i can. though i think you should start by switching their souls. hermione in ron, ron in ginny, and ginny in hermione. that would drive them crazy. they should stay like that for a week.

or u should make them blur out the truth or some secret every time someone says a word that gets used alot like, now or the or their name or something like that.

or they should speak like a donkey every now and then like "ronald, i can't believe u would, heehaw, u'r jus a, heehaw, i don't know y i, heehaw." "professor, heehaw, i want to, heehaw, to u and then, heehaw, on the, heehaw heehaw, and then we could, heehaw heehaw." lol

2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?
FEED THAT FRAUD TO THE BASALISK!!

3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
Draco.....well he isn't there much to give a real opinion on him. though he is kind of cool, a bit whiney. but he is still young. jus a bit more slytherin a dash of evil and u have the perfect draco malfoy.

4) Should Cedric die?
yes he should. no one likes the pretty boy, and unless u decided to change the ritual he is needed.....or he could jus be for sport. (death eater fun)

5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
No. the basilisk should live. harry may need someone else to talk to, to get a closer insight on parselmouth magic and wat not, and who better than the snake that belonged to salazar slytherin.

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From smexyforever on May 22, 2009

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? yes the twins,neville (and luna)
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)yes but a different mark
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? this year, by ginnys death

6)Should I kill off Ginny? yes, or make her evil and not harryloving
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) maybe a black, evil phoenix
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? super powerful
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) a black panther, a little kitty, a basilisk, a dregon and a black unicorn.
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From Ewe on March 03, 2008
Question sets 1:
1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?
3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
4) Should Cedric die?
5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
Answers set 1:
1. Ron and Hermione don't really know yet. Revenge is sweet...or blame them for something. Ginny should die if she does not change. But you could let her find out the real truth and side with harry after Chamber of secrets.
2. Keep Lockhart and get rid of him early on. one cool thing to do is have him leave early out of fear. then have Malfoy teach under ministry Rule. sort of a non umpridge rule
3. the truce should be rocky but gets better as it goes along.
4. Yes
5. No...Have it as Harry's fimillar

Questions set 2:
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
answers set 2:
1 Yes....Slytherin
2 Twins on harrys side...everyone else is a no. Ginny, ron and hermione is up top
3 No he should not be marked. his mark is the scar
4 Don't really know...it could be this year....but kept under wraps until fourth year
5 Dark side....and....yes. Snape finds out about truth about Harry's past that starts it
6 answer is up top
7 Basilisk, shadow pheonix, or dark unicorn
8 Super powerful with extra abilities.
9 Dragon, Snake, Phoenix, Wolf, Dementor (interesting one)
10 I like the questions.

This is a great story keep it up please and if you need a beta just email me sheep_mcirvin@yahoo.com

Ewe
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From voldemortsgrl on January 11, 2008
More please. This is an interesting story I must admit. I would love to see what furture events will be coming.
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From ThePurebloodedFreak on January 02, 2008
absolutely fantstic up date soon

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From Tigergirl on October 28, 2007
Okay, in this order. Don't know; have the Big Snake bite him, then spit him out, complaining he tastes nasty; I think Harry might feel Draco's betraying him if he runs to his father after everything; No, I like Ced, make him go Dark! and No, in a story I read by whydoyouneedtoknow on fanfiction (Living without Danger, I think), Harry talks to the Basilisk, befriends her, Fawkes makes her eyes non-lethal, and she ends up living happily in the forest. That's my favorite so far of what happens to her (or him, whichever, but I think it's a girl). As to the questions in chapter five, I always thought Harry belonged in Slytherin; I think at least Fred, George, Neville, Luna, Remus, and Sirius should support him; NO!! Sorry, I just don't like the thought that he's marked (at least, with the dark mark); This year, but hid out till 4th; Harry's, and I think he should be something like a father; YES. Ginny is a nasty bitch who should just wither up and die (at least in this story); a cat/tiger kit or a wolf pup; sort of a mixture of both. really powerful, but have some things he can do no one else can; a solid black tiger (that can change to white) w/ green eyes, a bigger-than-usual wolf pup (again solid black), a Basilisk that combines the colors of both Slythers and Gryffens plus a hint of black and he can turn the deadly eyes on and off at will, I'm running out of ideas!; No, I like it when the author asks input from the readers, even if I, personally, don't answer the questions. Woodlandstalker out
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From DravanaMyst on August 13, 2007
i really hope that you continue this story. it is very interesting and i cant wait to see how it all plays out.
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From berkie88 on June 30, 2007
love thos story! the challenge was by RemusGirl (I know, that's how I found the story).

great that the twins are on his side and Bill and Charlie... they are my favorites.
I wonder what will happen between Voldemort and Tom... and whether Tom will try to kill Harry because he was 'misinformed' by Ginny. it would be difficult if there were 2 of them so what should happen to Ginny is dependant on that... if Voldemort takes over Tom's body, she should die. if Voldemort makes his own body, she should live. and when he should be back... as soon as possible ;-)

OMG! is that the boa from the zoo? but that one was from Brazil and was longer than 5ft... but I'm always wondering about what happened to the boa, if he made it to Brazil (yes, I'm strange like that ;-)) so if it's him that would be great.

why do the Weasley's want him to be dark? then he wouldn't fight with them right?
I hope you'll continue soon! it is definitely a nice idea!
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From Prongslet on June 15, 2007
I love the story. Poor Harry, I hope he makes everyone pay. You know, you can set the snake on Hermione for being a mudblood and as for Ron, all Harry has to do is lure him to the forest and let him be eaten by the spiders. Wouldn't that be ironic? Eaten by your worst fear. I'm glad that the twins aren't betraying Harry, I've always liked them.
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