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By : PatienceTyme
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From luvhp on May 10, 2007
    I don't normally read D/Hr ships, but this one is GREAT!!!! I actually had little flutters in my stomache when he first kissed her. Your writing is amazing and I love the banter between the two. I love how you wrote Ron out of the picture with him going back to Lavender! LOL
    Keep it up and I hope to see an update soon. I usually hate reading WIP stories because they take so long and I get impatient so I go off and read 10,000 other stories. :)

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  • From Jerrillith on May 08, 2007
    Patience Tyme Wow! This is a great story. I really like it and I definitely look forward to future chapters. Please write again soon.
    Lady Jerrillith

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  • From ANON - hotchik on October 14, 2006
    Was great best so far, please write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From PinkTribeChick on June 18, 2006
    A wonderful story! I beg you please, update!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 18, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Paranoia on June 16, 2006
    How to say this kidly...you write as if you're from the 1600s century! Who the hell writes, or talks for that manner, like this now? Now one! Make your writing more relaxed and less sophisticated/complex. You have a great story, but I can't go through with it. If the time the story took place was somewhere in the Renaissance period it would make more sense, but I presume that it's taking place this century, thus I see no reason for the teenagers to talk like they do in your story. Make the teenagers sound like teenagers, not over-arrogant professors discussing Shakespeare. All in all your story and writing is pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Cristee on June 15, 2006
    Wow that was really great. I loved Hermione and Nacissa's evoliving relationship. The constant bantering and challenge of wills were very entertaining. I can't wait to see you update this one!
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