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Reviews for My Happy Ending

By : Shanastay
  • From Persy on January 22, 2022

    Snape ran after her, knowing she would be too distraught to use her magic sensibly, he found her trying to drown herself in the murky waters of the Thames. He ran to her pulled her out of her death knell and shoved a pensive in her arms, he quickly dropped his recent memories of himself and her. She glared into the memories that had just played out just an hour before. As Hermione emerged from the pensive she stood, shell shocked in front of her husband. "Let us get our revenge, sweet wife and we shall dance upon Potters' corpse" whispered her husband, "we shall make him pay with his very lifes' blood"! They found Potter at his home, Hermione went to him first, he saw her through his curtained windows, "Good, now she will live has both Ron and I are"! he muttered to himself. He answered the door and just as Hermione was crossing the threshold, Snape popped up behind his now livid wife, both wands at the ready; "What!!!???" before Harry got another word out, Severus and Hermione both cast Avara Kadavera on Harry, he vaporized with not a sign of his existence anywhere. They both spit where he once was, wrapped their arms around each other and headed for home. Happily Ever After!


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  • From Persy on September 04, 2021

    HARRY POTTER MUST DIE!!!!!!


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  • From Persy on June 21, 2021

    I liked the story, well written, simply sick, I must say.


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - jenne on September 10, 2006
    Fantastic! Well written. I'd like to see you develop this into a bigger story, but it could be tricky. I'd advoid using more songs within the story though, it worked here because of the brevity, but in longer stories it becomes distracting and cheesy. Thanks
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on September 10, 2006
    oooohhhh. I loved that. Harry is bitter because his and Ron's lives have been ruined, but Hermione is so happy. I honestly did not see that coming, so Bravo! I thought for sure it was going to be the illicit lover coming out of the shadows. I am going to go read the sequel now, as this one was so good.
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  • From ANON - Aelfwine on September 09, 2006
    Wonderful story . Great plot twist . write a sequel, or a prequel
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  • From ANON - Chavela on September 07, 2006
    FUCKING PERFECT!

    Damn bloddy brialliant! And you are just a damn good writer, this story is genius!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - lemonade on July 11, 2006
    I'll get this out of the way first... I don't normally enjoy having to read my stories around lyrics of a song, and I'm not always fond of dark!Harry. That said, I really liked your story ! You took some of my least favorite things and still wrote a story compelling enough for me to enjoy, so you deserve lots of praise. I'd love to see where you would go with this.

    Very nice!
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  • From ANON - Kiwi on June 28, 2006
    *claps hands* Brilliant... bloody brilliant... well done
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