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Reviews for The lost child returns

By : nightangle
  • From Selera on February 10, 2007
    Your evil leaving off there.. you must do more far more.
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  • From In2Deep on February 08, 2007
    I love it please up-dates soon!
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  • From In2Deep on February 02, 2007
    Damn! and here i was all excited about getting a new chappie... up-date it soon please!
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  • From melodelic on February 01, 2007
    In chapter two there are slight grammatical errors, but other than that I think this story is really good! The errors are where Harry/Steffin is about to get the want, and at the end with him in the shower with fond instead of found.
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  • From DravanaMyst on February 01, 2007
    this story is brillant.. i can not wait for the next chapter..
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  • From ANON - Child of the Darkened Moon on January 10, 2007
    So far an interesting story. Although you haven't written quite enough for a thorough judgement of that. So please write more.
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  • From ANON - Daemon on December 25, 2006
    This is one of the best stories I have read so far pleas contiue it.
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  • From ANON - Nanashi on December 17, 2006
    Oh my.... when is Voldemort going to show up?

    I am looking forward to finding out the way Voldemort will be brought back to life, will there be flashbacks of Steffin's training
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  • From ANON - Katrina on October 22, 2006
    Wicked! I wasn't expecting your story to flow that way. With the way that first year is to go, maybe they can gather all the horaxcues and resurect Tom to his youngest self and thus Harry will beable to take his side.

    Seeing that Harry is into hardcore BDSM, he might even have to go as a slave for his mate.

    I like your story line and wish you the best. hopefully the few ideas I gave can help.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - BRM on October 22, 2006
    omg i love it so far i really do hope you continue it so far it is one of my fave's
    XDXD
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  • From ANON - frozenrose on September 12, 2006
    Hi! I'm sure that you have everything well under control. It's kind of hard to give advice without knowing all the facts. For instance what you have planned for the story. If I knew that I could then give you some advice.
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  • From ANON - Katonie on August 07, 2006
    Hey! YOu should continue with the same story line that it seems you're going with. To me it seems that Voldemort will be brought back in Steffin's first or second year. By the way I like that idea where he's trained to be aroused by pain.Keep the good work up!
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  • From ANON - Wilder on August 06, 2006
    this is a really interesting idea. i haven't really seen many fics with a truely deatheater severus that worked. so far this seems to. so harry was trained to be voldies mate... now he is starting hogwarts, this has alot of potential but could also go very wrong. is voldemort still going to possess Quirrel? or is there something else... harry, oops, steffin, could still be in Gryffindor, but if he likes his position as riddle's mate, or just doesn't know any better than slytherin is for him. i have to say i like your writing style, you are able to give a lot of information without droneing on. i look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2006
    IT IS GOOD UPDATE SOON
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  • From KagetsuAsame on July 20, 2006
    I look forward to the next part. Keep up the good work.
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