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By : Bravmiki
  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on November 12, 2006
    Ch.8 - First off, you should be way back in the line for betas. Your writing is very polished as is. I only noticed a couple of missing words which you can add easily. The sentences, "How long do expect testing to take?" and "What would like to do for the rest of the day?" are both missing the word 'you'.

    Second, I very much like that Hermione isn't a pushover for Lucius. Lemons are all very well and good (okay, I love them like anybody else) but the plot of Hermione and Lucius coming from poles apart to some sort of togetherness is much better told if they aren't constantly in the sack (darn it). So, I'm happy that Lucius continues to think like crafty Lucius and can't understand Hermione's viewpoints - yet - as she teaches him about her values. Oh, and I have posted reviews for you before. I used Xanti1100 before I started writing my fanfictions, so I'm not a latecomer. I just wanted the separation of an author's name. 8-)

    Loving your Lucius character and waiting for more. Twiddling thumbs here. Thank you for updating!
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  • From ANON - 99 on November 12, 2006
    Wow!! You story is just so hot!! "-) Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for updating so soon.
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  • From ANON - BuckyKattGirl on November 12, 2006
    Oh, what an evil little tease ending it like that! Please get Hermione over her stupid little snit soon so we can have some action!
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  • From ANON - 99 on November 09, 2006
    I was so thrilled to see that you updated. Thank you!!! This was a great chapter by the way. Please update soon. This truly is one of my favorite stories. "-)
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 08, 2006
    i am very happy with the story and i so LOVED the last chapter and this one was really good too. Hermione is such a fool sometimes, se could and would appreace the jewels and the cloths just make a statement sometimes. so i do hope that wont deture lucius for sometimes spoiling her and i do hope she accepts it better. sorry some of that spill was just me i do love and like the gift yet i don't think it should be all the time or even just to make up an agument-okay i am done, i promise! do update soon i look forward to what will happen next!:)
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  • From ANON - BuckyKattGirl on November 08, 2006
    Thank You, MikiB! I look forward to more Luscious Lucius updates soon!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on November 08, 2006
    I am so impressed. I was so interested in this story, but I had suspected that as soon as Lucius and Hermione had hit the sheets, I would see intstant, improbable love and affection. This promises that he is going to have to work really hard to learn what to do now that he's made this mess.

    So, is there SOCIALLY no divorce, or legally no divorce, or magically no divorce... I'm wondering about her plea of divorce. Is she truly trapped and doesn't realize it, or is Lucius not going to let her go and she doesn't realize it, or does she know and is trying to rub it in his face that he asked for it? :D Just things I think about.

    Thanks for the update, I like your writing quite a bit.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on November 08, 2006
    oh man!!! I got to the end of the chapteer and was like... NO!!! I want the next chapter!!! I want to read what happens next!!! I needs to know!!!Please update soon! I'm dying to find out what happens

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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    Love it. Lucius at his finest. Blackmail. Lust .Greed. Social status. Lucius is outdoing hisself. I can't wait for him to realize he needs her. sweet . Cant wait to find more. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 08, 2006
    Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - 99 on October 28, 2006
    I want you to know that your story is my absolute favorite!!! So please update soon!! Your story has actually dragged me, kicking and screaming out of my regular, noncommittal voyeur position to write a review. So please update soon.

    Thank you very much,
    99

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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on October 01, 2006
    Wow! I definately like this story! Lucius is just the right amount of Pratty arse, and sexy lover to just make the reader want more! Very very good! I can't wait til the next chapter!
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 30, 2006
    I'd say the writer's block phase is definitely gone - wow, such a great chapter!! And the character Brutus is just too hilarious! *lol*
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  • From ANON - BuckyKattGirl on September 23, 2006
    WeeHoo! (Fanning self furiously!)Damn that man is HOT! Thanks for the sizzling update! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 21, 2006
    Ch 6 - ooh, nice chapter!! I can see how Lucius might've sped up the marriage after Hermione's stunt the other night, letting him know she was trying to wiggle out of things. Glad she and Ginny talked about the pictures so that Hermione knew she was doing the right thing. Hot lemon, but you've heard that many times, I'm sure! Thanks for posting!!
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