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By : Bravmiki
  • From ANON - lemonade on September 21, 2006
    Well, Lucius might have maneuvered enough to get his way, but he has definitely earned whatever Hermione plans on putting him through. He might be attractive, but he hasn't earned any trust or true affection from her. It will be interesting to see if he attempts to make things right between himself and his wife or if he messes things up and alienates her even more.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on September 21, 2006
    Lucius raised himself until he was kneeling. Lifting Hermione, he pistoned furiously into her. The sound of skin hitting skin filled the air. He fucked her roughly, grinding his pelvis against her clit. Hermione moved in time with him, seeking something that seemed to slip from her grasp every time Lucius withdrew.


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  • From ANON - pinkwands on September 21, 2006
    great chapter!!! :D I love how he calls her privates "mine" heheh naughty old lucius :D
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  • From ANON - Xanti1100 on September 16, 2006
    I'm enjoying your story immensely. Hermione routing Lucius with the threat of Granny panties!! That "fearsome threat" made me laugh out loud. You make Lucius true to his character; I like that. He's my favorite in the movies - too bad he'll likely get knocked off, but if you write such entertaining stories, he'll always be alive in them. Thanks for writing this. I'm waiting for Chapter Six.
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  • From ANON - June on August 28, 2006
    Ch 5 - ooh, wonder what Lucius' "contingency plans" are... Thanks for the new chapters! Re "next update will be within the next 7 seven days" - how about if you make the new update much longer? (heh-heh! couldn't help asking...)
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  • From ANON - Citten on August 28, 2006
    yeah! another chapter and now i want more lots more!! Do i REALLY have to wait seven days!!
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  • From ANON - BuckyKattGirl on August 28, 2006
    About Damn Time! I have been waiting forever for you to update this story! Although what the the hell she's fighting him for I have nooooo idea! Absolutely no resistance to Luscious Lucius from this girl! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 27, 2006
    YAY AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! woohoo it was well worth the wait :D ohhh hmm what event would that be huh? something dirty? hehe great chappie!
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  • From ANON - Moonstar on August 26, 2006
    *squee*


    Update update update!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Esmeralda on August 26, 2006
    Oh sweet Lord! I need more... who can resist they way you depict Lucius? The sexual tension is devine torture! very good love! update soon... I want to see a wedding band on her hand! oh and... the wedding night.. don't forget that lovely detail.. mmm
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  • From Midnight28 on August 13, 2006
    Please update soon, i can't wait to see more of this story.
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  • From ANON - cherie on August 11, 2006
    I really like this story! This is getting good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2006
    PLEEEASE update!!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on August 06, 2006
    Boy, Hermione isn't making this easy on Lucius is she? I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - xanti1100 on August 04, 2006
    My very favoirte stories are Lucius and anybody, but especially Hermione. There can't be too many of that type of pairing. You've captured Lucius beautifully, arrogant, hot, commanding, and sexy. Hermione is really trying to give as good as she gets; I like her continuing to resist him (to no avail, of course) 8-). I hope you update this soon, so I can find out what happens at the restaurant, but also when the next intimate "dancing" takes place. You're getting us closer and closer, but snatching them apart, which really makes for great tension. The "climax", as it were, will be all the more fantastic to read. And if there is more than one "climax" I certainly won't complain. Great writing style, love the storyline. Well done. Xanti1100
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