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By : Bravmiki
  • From purefaith91 on November 15, 2010
    She was really prepared for Lucius to be a snake. I think she was just surprised by the lengths he would go to in his quest to rise above his past. She should have told Ginny though. It is ridiculous for her to go through it alone alienating all of her support system. Plus, it is not hers to bear alone when she was not the only person in the compromising position. Hate martyrs. p
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  • From IntegraHellsing on July 28, 2009
    AMAZING!!!!
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  • From dragon88 on May 15, 2009
    Brilliant! more please :) D
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  • From margaritama on November 26, 2008
    Fuck her into obedience???? OH PLEASE DO!
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  • From margaritama on November 26, 2008
    I love how they started off slow, sensual and gentle and then Lucius became a beast - I'm trembling.
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  • From margaritama on November 26, 2008
    Naughty hot Lucius! Wow - so he knows he's going to get into her knickers - HOT
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  • From hrmny4etrnty2 on October 06, 2008
    Dear MikiB:

    Congratulations! Your story LUCKY has been nominated at the Smutastic Awards for Best First Time. To proceed to the seconding phase, please email us at smutasticawards@yahoo.com by October 15th 2008, stating you give your permission for the story to run in the above stated category.

    Again, congratulations, and we invite you to check out the awards community by visiting us at http://community.livejournal.com/smutastic_award/.

    Sincerely,

    Wildflower4evr, Smutastic Awards Moderator
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 31, 2007
    This was excellent. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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  • From ohsnaptheresa on August 12, 2007
    i lovve this so far! please keep it up! and e-mail me once you've updated! i'd be soo grateful!
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  • From firewall on June 30, 2007
    Ch 10 - I think it would be a mistake if you re-wrote the chapter. The Lucius POV was needed and the ensuing battle needed as well. Hermione would be content to let things continue as they have gone despite what she thinks and some kind of action was needed to bring them back together. And boy, did you bring them back together! I must admit though that I was left wondering whether Hermione was refering to the spanking or the sex. Hmmm, interesting possibilities.
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  • From BUCKYKATTGIRL on June 29, 2007
    Awesome! I've been aching for this story to be updated! MoreMoreMore!
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  • From on June 27, 2007
    Yea! I am so thrilled you updated. I had been waiting with great anticipation for the gratuitous spanking scene. Those are my favorite.

    I love the line
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 25, 2007
    Chapter 10: Hermione appears to have awakened the beast in Lucius. Lucky girl. He's sated for now, but will he relax back into a more compliant husband or has she pushed him into that macho persona she felt on her derriere?

    I can't wait to see if Hermione comes out swinging from her corner or if the fish fight was enough for the two of them for now. Will she retaliate for the spanking? At the time it looked like she was enjoying herself after the first shock wore off. It was obvious HE was enjoying himself.

    So where does this dysfunctional marriage go from here? Are there any more surprises in store? Old girlfriends showing up and making trouble between Lucius and Hermione? Lucius cutting off her access to any money? Hermione organizing the house elves? Or redecorating his mansion in Gryffindor colors? I can't guess what will happen next. Hot chapter! Thanks!

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  • From wicraven on June 25, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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