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Reviews for From Bad to Worse

By : RyleeJane
  • From ANON - rayder04 on September 29, 2006
    I am so glad that you are continuing this story, is quite good.

    The mystery of what happened to Harry is interesting and also the dependency he have to Hermione, even if he doesn't sayit in so many words, his actions are obvious.

    The relationship that Hermione have with Ron is long over, she should make it end, even if she doesn't stay with Harry, she doesn't love Ron like a lover and its making him and her unhappy, better to let him go to find another person.

    I just hope to read next chapter soon and also I keep my vote to a H/Hr story.

    JO
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  • From ANON - THX1138 on September 28, 2006
    I don't know, what to think about this story. I think it is so highly unlikly that Hermione could EVER cheat in a relationship, that I just have problems to find this story believable. If she gets like this when she is kissing Ron: "feeling the nausea build in her stomach again", why is she not ending it? It would be much more believable and easier too. I just don't get it. Hermione is too OOC.
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  • From ANON - mannequin on September 28, 2006
    I read this over on RS.org, and am quite glad to see that it's posted over here. Does this mean that you will be revising the version over on RS.org? Because I believe there's another chapter over there. Oh I just can't wait for a NEW update =) Good luck with the writing!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on September 28, 2006
    Hey, thanks for another good chapter! I like how you show Hermione's inner fight. I hope to read more! Please keep writing. I would like to know if Hermione ends up with Harry. And I can't wait to read about Sam! Hurry!
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  • From ANON - Sabra on July 11, 2006
    I absolutely love this story! I read it over at restrictedsection.org, but I could never figure out how to review over there so I'll review now. This story is phenomenal. I love dark stories, but hardly anybody writes them. And if they do, most of them are done poorly. This story is extremely well-written and mysterious. I eagerly await the upcoming chapters when we can learn more about Harry and Hermione's relationship along with what exactly happened to Harry when he was captured.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 04, 2006
    I love your story!! Keep writing. I want to see how the relationship develops between Harry and Hermione. And will Mrs. Weasley discover their secret? I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the way how you started with the situation how ist is now but also showed how everything started between them. Your story is not superfical, all the describtions make the story whole. Hey, are we going to see more from Sam?
    In hopes to read more soon....

    [Sorry for sp- english is not my mother language]
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 04, 2006
    I love your story!! Keep writing. I want to see how the relationship develops between Harry and Hermione. And will Mrs. Weasley discover their secret? I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the way how you started with the situation how ist is now but also showed how everything started between them. Your story is not superfical, all the describtions make the story whole. Hey, are we going to see more from Sam?
    In hopes to read more soon....

    [Sorry for sp- english is not my mother language]
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  • From ANON - votehermione on July 04, 2006
    Simply great. I can not wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2006
    absolutely brilliant.
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  • From ANON - C. Green on June 29, 2006
    Sorry.. I typed roll, huh? My bad, I meant scroll, I had to scroll the story sideways to read it, but it's cool, it happens all the time, specially at Portkey..
    Wow! So, you're making changes in the story? Can't wait to read them. The whole story actually. Did you finish it already or is it still a work in progress?
    Again, thanx for writing.
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  • From ANON - icemice on June 29, 2006
    whew! that was rather intense, wont you agree? ;-) you got the knack for making vivid what may altogether look and sound timid. and at the right moment, you slipped in the cliffhanger. and a reader just cant help waiting what happened when Harry disappeared. Very well written scenes and smartly mature theme really gets this fic going. And im waiting with anticiaption the next chapter, mate. ;-) hope it wont take long to upload it. ;-)
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  • From ANON - C. Green on June 28, 2006
    Sorry, me again... this time I've got a favor to ask please... could you go easy on the "*******************" that you place on the story, 'cause they're making my screen roll sideways...


    tks.
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  • From ANON - C. Green on June 28, 2006
    Hi Rylee,

    Oh, it's great to see that you decided to post this story here since you can't do it on Portkey...


    So far this story is great, I can't wait to find out more about the situation H/Hr are in and the things that happened that lead them to their current situation.


    Keep writing,

    Tks, C. Green.

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  • From ANON - Hillarie on June 28, 2006
    This story is great so far!!! I think the idea is different than a lot of others out there and it's very well written. Keep going :)
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